Striving 

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by DoneDeleted, Jul 15, 2012.

  1. Oh my gosh toxic
     I'm in love with this
     
  2. Thats good, I just reseted.
    So, Thank you! I shall update soon.
     
  3. Working on a new piece, so this may take a slow process, help is nice.
     
  4. Beautiful! Amanda is so lucky to have such an amazing story dedicated to her!! 
     
  5. PLEASE UPDATE BEFORE I CRY!!!!
     
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    Amanda rising from a 60-feet drop glided herself through a flag, ripping it a tad bit for safety, and trapeezing through a pole, soundly making her do a backflip and to the ground where her village set upon her.

    She had no idea where to go, but the sudden movements of everyone let her relax. Striding closely, hiding from the villagers, she saw that the diamond turned to a sudden white.

    Clink!

    Amanda paused, the sword out, her actions ready. But there was no one, just herself and a little girl, pausing by her, with a lollipop in her hand, but she let it off to the ground.

    "The princess!"she gasped in delight, her squeaking voice disturbed Amanda, but she stayed still.

    The little girl bowed slightly, which calmed Amanda, and grabbed her hand,"My brother wanted to see you for so long."

    Amanda shrugged but her eyes narrowed.

    Who was she gonna meet?
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  7. IM GOING TO MEET ADAM! Jk jk maybe idk
     
  8. Me! It's me!!! 
     
  9. ._. Who knows?
     
  10. NO ITS JOHNNY DEPP!!!
     
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    As the little girl guided Amanda through the poverty infested village, her mind left her drift as she smelled the rising dough of the bakery, the soft delicate sways of the flowers, and the scent of the bars do whiskey, her heart was at rest.

    The little girls grip was demanding, as she was excited to the bone.

    How had Amanda got so popular.
    She really didn't understand by that.

    They both stopped at a creaking, almost abandoned house close to the edge of the village, where everything was crooked, even the house, titling.

    The girl whispered kindly,"Let me get him."she let go of her tiny little hands off of Amanda, as she rubbed her own hands together, trying to remember the soft touch of a child.

    The little girl opened the broken beige door, and screamed shrill,"Stephan! Look what I found!"

    Then a groan escaped,"Do you mind? I have to leave to work...."and he stepped out.

    The man was beautiful, his stubbled chin was attractive, as well as himself, he was a strong lean man, but had the eyes and personality of a gentle giant. He had an apron on, covered in hearts, which made Amanda snicker to herself.

    Stephan arose, and looked at the little girl,"Yes, Penelope? What did you want me to see?"

    The girl giggled,"I found her!"

    He looked from side to side, not noticing Amanda with her elegant courtier.

    Penelope smacked her face and pointed to Amanda, who was inspecting a bug,"That's. The.Princess."

    Then the face of the brother turned so red, Amanda thought he was dying.
    "The princess!"The showered her in hugs and sniffling sobs.

    Such a man.

    Amanda looked at him, but his eyes were gleaming,"Well, Princess, it's an honor to me you."

    Silence.

    "Princess?"

    Amanda stared at him blankly.

    "Princess!"

    Then Amanda swatted him with a stick and pushed his pressure point, causing his laughter to die and him collapse on the ground, fainting like a baby.

    The little girl laughed her insides out.

    But Amanda didn't laugh, she was proud.
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  12. AWWW YEAH!!!! That was awesome!!!!
     
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    The little girl giggled,"Your amazing! Why don't you visit the village?"

    Amanda spoke, hesitant,"I'm not belonged here."

    Stephan woke up, trying to figure out Amanda's purpose was for making him go down.

    "Well, we wish you would stay."Stephan coveted his head.

    Amanda nodded and strolled off.

    Then.....

    Ping.

    There felt a crease in Amanda's arm that made it go numb, as so had her vision, everything turned to a blur when a black figure started to fight Stephan and the take Penelope, her crying in pain and yelling.

    Amanda strides her arm, trying to help, but her world went numb.

    Had she been fooled?
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  14. IVE BEEN FOOLED?!?! o_O
     
  15. That was amazing
     
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    She found herself in a uncomfortable brown wooded chair, with her mouth draped and filled with cloth, and her eyes bloodshot.

    "I see you are awake."a distant voiced rang.

    Amanda couldn't say anything, but groaned at the pain in her arm, and signed when her weapons were disposed at the table in front of her.

    She stared at the woman with deadly eyes.

    "You seem rested, want some advice?"the woman chuckled.

    And she slapped Amanda on the cheek, hard, and wanted Amanda to know......

    What caused her to deserve this.
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