Allure

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by DoneDeleted, Jul 16, 2012.

  1. Yes, yes I did. 
     
  2. So that means you called, Master? Oh I feel like Doby! 
     
  3. Haha no, your good. Lol it's just weird being a master, I was always the slave lol
     
  4. -Gasp- Master Toxic?! A slave?! No!!
     
  5.  cue to run out Elysie.
     
  6.  oh so Busted.
    Muah.
     
  7. Elf Triston will leave now. -runs a away laughing hard- 
     
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  9. Come back here! 
    -takes whip out-
     
  10. Nuuuu!! -runs faster- Not the whip!!!
     
  11. Yes, a whip from a freakin night! Hail their long pointy hats!
    -engages whip-
     
  12. Blimey! Where's Harry when I need him! -runs as fast as her little feet can take her-
     
  13. Awesome!! Bump!
     
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    Then the shot rang, my ears pieced my the sudden blow, causing my mind to feel like a blur, throbbing.

    Then I see the silhouette, it's purple eyes menacing and astounding,"Wait!" I called out, afraid of what he had done to the bear, but the figure just disappeared. All I had left was the still forest and the fallen bear.

    I checked through the body seeing if they did any real damage when I saw a wound from the gut, probably from a shot-gun. The bear seized to get up, it's shallow breaths tired, unwanted.

    I felt pity for the bear, but I only did was sit near the bear, even though how much it's done to me, the intense scar would on my cheek, still stinging from my tears, I felt a tickle in my spine.

    The bear stood up. It crouched it's legs as it limped toward me. I was nervous of what is was gonna do to me, but the dark eyes hypnotized, when suddenly, out of the blue, I swore I heard the bear say,"Foolish girl."

    This was so abnormal.
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    Feedbacks?
     
  15. Working on a new piece, so this may take a slow process, help is nice.
     
  16. Bear!!!! That bear! Oh gosh I can't even! I know you're busy, but if you have the time to, UPDATE THIS! 
     
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    That gave me the time to scream! I yelled, trying to succeed from my madness.

    "I'm not mad!"I whispered to myself, hugging my swollen, bruised knees, when I flinched at the sound of a huff.

    "You aren't, I just think your delusional."the best grinned, wiping the blood off it's body, healing the wounds quickly.

    My mouth quivered, but I croaked the words,"Your a bear....how...can you speak?"

    The bear finally looked at me, and there I saw the bear swipe a maple leaf and dabbed some sap on my scar cut, and I felt the oddly odorless honey to seep into my skin, feeling the wondering feeling of pleasure.

    "You mustn't notice.It's not hard."the bear sniffed the air, and sneezed.

    This bear.......was it......PROTECTING ME?
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    That's okay?
     
  18. Yesssss! I love you Mr. Bear!! 
     
  19. Yay! But I must write my other stories. Hey! I have an idea!