Also, another story to come and like! I would love to dedicate this to Elysie, who is one of the greatest people I know, so she deserves something! Hope you love it! What drives people to act strange? Mental habits? Or the way they allure people by hand gestures, or the way they strut? I have no clue. One thing for sure, I have the ability to make anything seem like a normal thing, to cease what's really beneath, I think it's a curse. Though made this way, my walls are always guarded by my heart, where it lay there, bearing slowly and rocking to the silent murmurs of the trees. My destructive point of view could seem different and foolish, just a girl who thrives for justice in the woods, alone, waiting for my mark to arise. My blue eye, as blue as the encasing river, flowing into treacherous and beautiful waves, and my other eye, pale as a cloud. Usually outcasts would be in the better lead than I am. But all that was gonna change. The roaring bear's chant ringed my ears and it bellowed in my face, it's drool dripping. Time to allure. Feedbacks?
My pulse raced as the grizzle stomped back and forth, sniffing the foggy air that came from my breath, so I kept still. But the bear just scratched me on my cheek, the flesh sizzling from the friction, my cheeks watering. The bear saw me, and I though it was gonna let it go, but it made me fall to the earthy ground, blood coughing from my throat. It circled around me, curious, and deadly. It wanted something from me, that's for sure. Then I realized it was my gem on my forehead, reflecting its opal colors on the sun, with a blazing crease.Shiny attracts the bear. But I couldn't move. My arrow was resting on the tree, helpless, while the bear crushed my legs, making it extremely difficult to move, crawling was my only chance. But the best caught up to me. With one paw, it flattened my legs, causing an electric force on my head, throbbing it. Am I about to end? The bear just sniffed me, it's dark eyes furious. It's the end.
Oh! It's dedicated to me? It is the most beautiful present I could have hoped for! Oh you! You know exactly what I like I will be looking forward to reading more of this. Maybe it's just me... But the bear sounds cute
Welp. This is awkward. I thought I was special! it's alright. Lovely story, and still very thoughtful of you!
I always enjoy your stories! Just hope you continue them allor make a cycle so you don't overwork yourself lol.
it's ok! I never overdue myself! But, I shall keep my stories intact. They seem to be a hit quickly.
I'm so gonna comment on this. -Ahem- Where can I start. The way you use these detailed words in the story, It's like watching a television. You described practically everything. Starting from the leg to the bear. Let's see..In this story, you detailed everything and that gives my point of view a bright sun. It's like let's say I was reading some other story and it read 'Her eyes were red' and thinking back, I would ask myself how red were those eyes? Were they blood red or were they fire red? So when you described her eyes and everything in her surrounding, you caught me in a trance. Nice story Toxic!
yes, I should. And more to go, because I bet by the end of this week, ill have a million stories to continue lol
And I bet by the end of the week, I'll have such words to say. And when you title stories, both You and Elysie, it's not cheap or common! You use words that people don't use often and I LOVE THAT. Keep writing!