Sophia - True Story

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Beth0411, May 13, 2012.

  1. Awe that sucks.. Goes to show a cheater never wins:) stick with nathan!! Update!
     
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  3.  I JUST READ ALL OF THIS RIGHT NOW! IT WAS GOOD!

    Blump! :3
     
  4. Awh:( and I bet that would be hard for you to stop ballet. I'm sorry. And your story is really interesting. :3
     
  5. Bump!

    Suspense!!!

    -Nightmare
     
  6. Ooh I'm so glad you're enjoying my story!! Haha, and it was..extremley hard, I cried like every night:'( but I still dance!! And I'm a performing arts student! Haha, should I really be saying this on the Internet?

    I SHALL UPDATE






    TONIGHT!!!!!
     
  7. You can call it a online diary? Or something?

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  8. It's ok:) and no, probably not :3
     
  9. We asked the Taxi driver to take us to the nearest waffle house.

    When we started to move, Nathan put his arm around me and I leaned my head on my shoulder. I wished this was Luke.

    "what did that d*ckhead want?" he angrily muttered.

    "nothing...we're just friends." I bitterly said, wishing I could say more.

    "well he seems to get awfully close to his 'friends' and you're a beautiful girl, I can see why he would want to get close to you. Ergh just thinking about him thinking about you.." he began getting angrier as his arm tensed around my shoulder.

    "Nathan! Let's not get jealous. I...I'm with you." it pained me to say those last words.

    I don't know why I was staying with him. Because he was the first guy I'd ever had?

    He loosened up and sighed.

    "you really think I'm beautiful??" I blushed, looking up into his hypnotizing eyes.

    "of course." he leaned down and kissed my forehead.

    The driver awkwardly looked at us quickly in his mirror.

    He cleared his throat, "we're here. That's $5.20 please" Natan payed the driver.

    We thanked him then exited the vehicle.

    We walked through the car park if waffle house, Nathan put his arm around me and I felt special. Like I was loved.

    "So...I was thinking, you have to come round mine one time...you know, check my place out?" he blushed nervously.

    "wow..erm yeah, sure!" I smiled.

    We went inside and ordered and ate our meals. Talking about our likes, dislikes, etc.

    I mean I was extremley attracted to him, who wouldn't be? But we were too different.

    My dislikes were his likes.

    And whenever I looked at him, I just wished I was looking at Luke: looking into his deep brown eyes....

    I began daydreaming, and every word Nathan was saying sounded like "Luke Luke Luke Luke Luke..."

    "Luke!!" I shouted.

    Nathan looked dissapointed, "why did you just mention that name?" I spotted out whilst avoiding eye contact.

    "ermm....I'm sorry? I have a hangover, I don't feel well." I lied.

    "I'll take you home then." Luke said shortly and threw money for the food aggressivley on the table. He stood up sharply then walled out without even waiting for me.

    I rushed to follow him..........
     
  10. Oops it's meant to "he spotted out aggressivley avoiding eye contact"

    Haha many typos again!:L lol.

    Thanks for reading everyone!!
     
  11. Lol you said luke said but you should have said nathan said oh well. U really shuldnt go to luke
     
  12. BUMP! 
    Update!!!! NOWWW 
     
  13. This is great!:3