The Origins of Samuel Portman

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Chewbacca (01), Mar 31, 2011.


  1. That's right, chewy, get back in line!
    You write really really well...

    More? 
     
  2. Some other time. Maybe Sunday. Too much to do lately :0
     
  3. *trudges away sadly*
     
  4. Lmao

    Nice info on the magics by the way.I love this story!!!!!!!
     
  5. Ah. So u named em.















    Now I need to name my power.
     
  6. Where is I?!?!
     
  7. Good job Chew! :]
     
  8. "... Back in Hell... This place sure loses its meaning after five years..." Samuel said, laying down on the infinite nothingness that was Hell. "Pure white... No darkness... I'm so lonely..." he turned over. "That Otto... What an ass, cutting off my arm... Well, he's strong I'll give him that, but there's no way he'll defeat Apoc or Ninz. Ninz didn't even have to try... But she's a subordinate to Apoc, so would that mean Apoc is stronger or simply just a figure head to Ninz? Either way, Ninz is way too strong for me... I wonder... What team do I even go with? Why did I want to kill Apoc? I'm growing too old for this... Maybe I'll just let that Otto guy handle it, but how? Well, he obviously knows he's strong, but can he actually beat Apoc or Ninz? Maybe I should help him..." he sits up and crosses his legs, "But if Apoc suspects anything he'll kill me... I guess I'll just have to go easy on him... Well, time to train!" a high pitched squeal was heard from afar "After all, I only have one year to master this power!"

    1 YEAR LATER

    "Samuel! I have something for you!" yelled Apoc, holding a large package.
    "What is it?" said Samuel taking the package.
    "Just open it!" Samuel opened the box, inside was a dark, seemingly late 18th century, uniform.
    "What is this..." he said, pulling out the contents of the box.
    "It helps increase the maximum amount of energy your shields put out!"
    "Really? I'll go try these out... I need to go see someone..."
    "Where are you going?"
    "To see Otto. There was somebody there that seemed familiar, so I'm going to where we fought, I'm assuming he lives there."
    " Do as you wish, it's no concern of mine as to what happens between you and him."
    "Thank you." said Samuel, walking away from Apoc.
     
  9. Chewy I know ur secret 
     
  10. Way to spoil the ending of Otto's story :0
     
  11. What ending? I'm not even close to the end.
     
  12. Oh*nervous laughter* o......Kay.
     
  13. Mhmm :3
    This story is already ending though. That's why I started the short story thread :3