my room mate...

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -ShyShy-, Jul 10, 2012.

  1. I sprang out of bed, as my alarm scared me awake.
    "Damn stupid alarm, go rot in hell you son of a piece of no use crap," I muttered to myself as I threw it out the window. I could feel a smirk appear on my face as I watched I crash against the pavement into a million pieces and scaring some zombie-like college kids.

    So what if I'm not a morning person? Its not like anyone is throwing pebbles at my window at night or even sliding a note under my dorm door asking me to meet them at a diner at 7. Who cares?

    I dragged my feet across the floor and grabbed the door knob resulting in a shot of electricity running through out my hand and up my arm. "mother of lucifer!" I moaned and continued walking to the bathroom. I turned the knob and opened the door to see steam coming from the top of the shower.

    "oh crap, I'm so sorry. I'll just come back in a few minutes when you are done." I tried to cover my eyes but the figure just behind that curtain was Thai perfect I couldn't help but stare.

    "is that you Jordan? You go on with what you were doing, I'll only be a minute more. Gotta look good for the first semester, right?" Amber says while poking her head out of the curtain.

    "sure, whatever you say Amber." I managed a low murmur while watching the shadow of her perfected body through the shower curtain.

    I snapped back into reality just as Amber turned off ye water signaling her exit out of the shower.

    "how was it?" I asked with a toothbrush in my mouth while leaning against the sink.

    "perfect." and with that she was gone.

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    Tell me Watcha think:)
     
  2. Bump I love it so far, a couple spelling errors, but it's all good
     
  3. Teehee! I like it! A couple of spelling errors. All in all it was pretty great. 

    I'm assuming Jordan is a guy? :3

    Blump! 
     
  4. Wow... How many alarms does he buy if he throws every single alarm out of the window? He must be rich XD

    Anyway other then that, it's fine~

    -Nightmare
     
  5. Uhhhh if I hardly think colleges would room a guy and a girl together.

    But it's good.
     
  6. No Jordan is a girl.  wait to see what happens! And sorry bout the spelling errors :-/ thank you guys! means a lot, all the likes. I didn't know at first if it was good or not. But thanks!
     
  7. This is good, but is she staring at her perfect body because she's jealous or something else…?
     
  8. My name is Amber. Awkward...

    But it's good! Continue!
     
  9. You'll see. I'll probably update later tonight or tomorrow.
     
  10. Lol the main character in my story is Amber
     
  11. story is over before it started  if someone wants to take over then be my guest. I have no inspiration anymore. Sorry