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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -Knight, Jul 8, 2012.

  1. Intro

    The hardest decision someone gave me was to decide to become a hero or a villain. Everything I ever wanted was to be normal yet my superhuman speed ad super human strength made it hard for me to fit in the human world. My father told me this were just abilities that I had not my real power, he said that my true power was gonna be reveal when I lost someone important in my life yet I didn't believe him but his word haunted my dreams. My parents got separated when I was just a kid when my father decided to join the dark side and become a villain and now he was in jail. My name was Hunter knight son of lunar and eclipse the most powerful people in the whole world. As the son of the two strongest people in the world my goal in life was to make sure my parents never fought and they never crossed each other path and for me to decide if I should stand by mom or dad side.
     
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    Love you baby
     
  3. Sorry if I haven't written anything for this story I will update it soon when I can just need motivation to write it well
     
  4. Oh I remember this,this sounds awesome.!
     
  5. I don't have any idea on what else to write I got a writers block right now that's why I decided to make the element rp cause it will give me ideas
     
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    "Hunter are you ready for school"my mother asked me

    "yes mom I'm almost ready just gotta get something to eat"I said

    I went to my room and grabbed my book bag then went to the kitchen.

    "remember Hunter not to use your powers when your at school cause this has been the third town we have moved because of you"mom said mad

    "look mom Idc what your problem is with me I'm not a human if you didn't want to raise me alone why didn't you find a bf but you didn't so deal with it now I'm a super human with powers"I yelled at her mad

    "don't use that tone with me son you know I still haven't forgotten about your father"she said with tears on her eyes.

    "mom he is in jail what do you want to do your whole life just take care of me until I move away from here or what"I said to her annoy

    "SHUT UP HUNTER,your a young teenager now your gonna be a young adult soon remember what your choice is join your father or join me"

    "like I care mom your always telling me to make that decision because I haven't gained full control of my powers"I said mad

    "just eat and go to school already"she said leaving the house and going to work.

    I finished eating then started running my way to school. My mom had asked if she could buy me a car but I denied it because I liked to run and be on shape. Without me knowing I bumped onto someone. "I'm sorry ma'am" I said apologizing.

    "don't worry about it at least your not hurt"she said looking at me"I'm Christine and you are?"

    "I'm Hunter"I said blushing eventhought I didn't know why I was blushing.

    "So your the new to my school"she asked me smiling. Her smile reminded me as the smile of angel my best friend from a long time who was run over it was a hit and run accident and no one found the culprit,I spent days crying over her death.

    "I'm sorry I gotta go"I said leaving. "why does she remind me of her why can't I forget about her?"I asked myself when I pictured her smile on my head. "I gotta find out who she is theres something familiar about her"I said as I started to run again going to school.
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    Well that's all I got so far I hope I can work on this story and update it next week
     
  7. Very imaginative!!!  I like it! It takes a lot to come up with so many unique ideas!
     
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    "so son how was your first day of school?" my mom asked me when I got home.

    "it was alright I guess" I said as I still was thinking of Christine.

    "Hunter what's wrong son did something happen at school?" mom asked me with a worried look on her face.

    "huh oh no" I said not paying attention to what she was saying.

    "Hunter did you heard me?" she yelled at me.

    "what?" I said looking at her confuse.

    "did something happen at school" she said to me.

    "no it's just that I saw this girl and she reminded me of angel and I don't even know why, I'm so confuse" I told her.

    I saw how my mom hands started to tremble with fear. "stay away from her Hunter don't you dare go near her Christine is just gonna kill you if you go near her" she said giving me a warning as tears started to fall from her cheeks.

    I looked at my mom for a second and saw she was being serious. "mom I promise I won't go anywhere near her"but what I didn't promise was that I wanted to find out who she really was and why it made my mom cry.

    "good"she said as she went to her room and cry.

    I went outside for a little bit ad saw two guys walking my way."hey you are you the one who hurt Christine?" one of the guy asked me.

    "if you were we are gonna beat you up for hurting james girlfriend"the other one said.

    "yes I will not let anyone hurt my girl even if it's someone as weak and pathetic as you"

    I looked at James and punched him right in the face knocking him out cold. "come anywhere near me again and I will send you both to the hospital" I said to the other guys.

    " I'm sorry"he said kneeling before me. "my name is Jack and you are?" he asked me.

    "Name is Hunter" I said as I walked toward the park. "I need to find out who she really is and stay out of trouble" I said to myself again.

    I looked around the park and saw Christine as she came walking toward me. "hey Hunter"she said to me.

    "hey" I said as I started to walk away.

    "what's wrong Hunter don't you want to be my friend?"she asked me.

    "I don't want to get in trouble just because I'm hanging around you since just because I bumped into you earlier today James your bf and Jack wanted to beat me up"I said to her.

    "what I'm sorry if that happened,are you okay did you got hurt?" she said worry.

    "yes I'm fine so I'll said it once only once,STAY AWAY FROM ME" I said to her in my sharpest and evilest voice I could make.

    "okay" she said sad running away crying.

    I looked at where she went disappointed in myself and at what I just did.
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    I'll update the story tomorrow or web I have time to update it
     
  9. o_O poor woman!
    But nice! 
     
  10. Well, it's a good idea, good plot. The quotations need punctuation. And you need to space after the quotes...
     
  11. PROOF READ!!!!!! And I don't mean to be harsh but sometimes I don't understand whats happening because of the bad grammar. But good story.
     
  12. I will just been having some writers block