He Loves Me Not 

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Cookie-Dough-Rebel (01), Jun 20, 2012.

  1. Hey guys  You probably don't know me, or remember me, but let's just say, I went for a long holiday. (it rhymes! )

    Anyway, I've done loads of fanfics before and I'd like to make one again for no particular reason 

    So here it is 

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    "Move on Eleanor. He's never gonna be yours. Now that he's mine." Venia taunted. Then she flipped her blonde locks into my face and sashayed away. "Brrrr. Looks like someone's showing off." my friend, Andie muttered sarcastically. "Ugh. Her perfume scent smells like some old lady's used lipstick. Let's scram."

    Venia may seem like Satan's little sister, but the whole Kingsley High worships her. Well, except for me. Her blonde hair goes from waves to spirals down her waist. She has icy blue eyes, probably a little lighter than mine. Her flawless pale skin is just another reason why I hate her. Not like I'm jealous, probably because her perfection is too real.

    Andie and I have just reached the lunchroom when we come across another problem. As we go in, I could feel more than a hundred pairs of eyeballs going my way. Then I spot Venia not too far away, and the little smirk on her perfect lips tells me she's done SOMETHING again.

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    Hope you enjoyed my little sneak peek  Tell me what you think, yay or nay?  vs 
     
  2. I'll be putting up a sign up thread soon if I get enough positive comments 
     
  3. Oh my gosh! I love this story already! Please notify me when you make a sign-up thread~

    -Nightmare 
     
  4. SOOOOOOOO Good!!!!! I'd definitely join
     
  5. I mean I'd definitely read it
     
  6. I clicked on this by accident but sooooooo glad I did!
    Please update soon and wall me once u have x
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  7. Update soonnn!!! Can I have a character?!
     
  8. OMFG GUYS I'm so sorry I'll have the next one up by today
     
  9. Loooooooool. Andie. .
     
  10. You don't remember me?! 
     
  11. Okay here's my ex-username


    ANGEL-JESSIE
    Or
    -AJ-Loves-Bubbles-
     
  12. Yeah I did it on purpose though 
     
  13. This is really good
    I wanna sign up!
     
  14. Ohmygoooshhh. Angel. Bubbles. I remember you!! AJ OMG you're backkk. I remember you! <333333
     
  15. ^_^ I love it.