Hey errrrryone. This thread is for people who don't think they can write very well(That would be moi and a bunch of other peeps EVERYWHERE!!!) Yes I know people can be Rude and mean so that's why this is now here. So if you feel like you can't write very well () then go ahead and share ideas and tips and advise here. If you hate I will kick u off of here. NO DRAMA!! No spamming And ask before u give someone a tip or advice. SPELLING DOESN'T MATTER IN HERE AS LONG AS WE CAN READ IT. NO SPELLING OR GRAMMAR NATZIS. THANK YOU.!!
Alright.. Scary Treasures ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ It was a dark night at my house, darker then usual. An eerie presence crept in the air as I lay in bed staring at the wall. I was just about to drift off when a loud thud came from down stairs.. Scared, I leapt from my bed and stood as still as I could in the center of my room. "what could it be?" I whispered to myself as I crept for the knife on my bedside table. I gripped it and slowly made my way down the stairs...
Don't you have a book to be writing instead of torturing ur lovely bf who might not be so nice anymore lol?
^_^ hmm....sure I'll give it a shot. I'm sky, and I am writing 3 forums, 2 collaborations. 1.Spiked Tears (first one, solo) 2.Unknown Protecter(Mrs.HappyGilmore) 3.Ombre nascote(AdamGontier) Some advice- 1.Detail! Makes it great 2. Don't jump to conclusions, let the moments last, causes more emotion. 3. Straight from the heart 4. Act like the char as possible, if too hard, either act it out with friends or go on other books to see examples, just don't copy them 5. Have fun, and bumps don't mean they aren't awesome 6.Find collabs, like me, I'm always available for a new story, to help and create a wonderful forum! So here is an example straight from the head. ~~~~Withering Shadows~~~~~ Life as we know it continues on and on, we're the planets rotate and day turns to night, everyone's fear will rotate, and find new meaning. One thing for certain, in the world, we find ourselves in the worst tormenting game of all...loneliness. It can enwrap you and consume you, sinking you into oblivion and through the cracks of time. You sink deeper, your breath slowly turning into the frigid ice, chewing your insides as your hallow body feels no more pain. My life can't stand to be a part of it, but it's already taken my soul. Standing inside the cell of the empty, encased castle of my grandfather, my hopes are already forgotten, I'm finished. Then the forcing winds rushed through the concealed windows with bars, causing my hair to fly upward, causing a complete knot. Then a blinding light caught me by my wrist and was sucking me into a black hole. I screamed for intervention, but I doubt anyone could hear me. I just let a tear drip down my cheek, stinging with so much hate, I closed my eyes, and sucked my breath to taste the rotten death smell of the black hole. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Questions will me answered!
I've been writing this story for a while, but I'm sure it could be improved. Could someone please read my story ᏰᏞᏫᎾᎠᏞᏌᏕᎢ and give me a few tips? (read all of it or just read the latest update because I have improved since I first started it)
A Twist in Time (a doctor who fan fiction) ~Emma's POV~ ugh boring day at work again. "EMMA GET ME COFFEE,"I hear the sharp chirpiness of my boss' voice. I don't want to but I have to because I'm just a apprentice. I walk down to the break room and smell the bitter smell of coffee and bagels. Of course there are bagels it's bagel Friday. I hear the humming of the old fridge but I also hear a sound I've never heard before and it seems to be coming from out side'whir whir whir'. I burst out the door and see a 1983 police public call box. I guess I just never saw it when I came in the office. I walk back in and pour the coffee. Then everything becomes silent. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Let me know if you need to know what doctor who is I'll post a description