Lyrics Mania

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by _Sheogorath_The_Mad_Prince_, Jul 5, 2012.

  1. Pm me your advice.
     
  2. Adam maybe add this to the chorus?: please you can help me get back, back to the way we were! Please don't let me go, I need your love so I know, that we could go, back to the way we were
     
  3. It's just a suggestion it's not that great just a random thought for it
     
  4. Woah.. thread died..
     
  5. No it didn't I just need more time to think
     
  6. Lol I'm so bored  here's a quick rap I just made 

    I may be a short girl who is really hyper, but I still know how to use a sniper.
    Hangin with the boys playin cod, difference with pimd you gotta watch out for the mods.
    Making a thread takes as long as making my bed. 
    Hell yeah I can make a sandwich, first make sure this is not a glitch 
     
  7. Haha thanks  their really easy to make lol try to make one that rhymes  Jorgie
     
  8. I have made one that rhymes lol
     
  9. I'll try to make another one but, I'm too busy to start on it tonight.
     
  10. Take your time Rebecca there's no rush 
     
  11. And on top of that I gtg so bbl
     
  12. 
    This is a rap attempt, see how this works out!
    ~~~~~Shake it off~~~~~(rap)~~~~

    Verse1-Your cornered in the back of the line, the crowds going crazy, they say you can't mess this time. For who knows, you might even go through it.
    Each breath pacing, so loud it's onto the roof, your heart is really racing, this is they you choose.

    Refrain-Dont let this feeling go underway, you weren't wrapped in ribbons. You might seem in the end of the string, but everyone's a beautiful
    thing, so grab your drinks and show how you can bring...it up. Just shake it off. Your one in a billion, maybe not the prettiest one. But ones thing for you, is to let you know, Just shake it off, oh just shake it off(x4)

    Verse2-Yeah.....oh yeah....
    Your friends are their to stay, always got your back, but are really that way? Some even don't take you to a place, some don't even think about date when you guys were found. Then who to choose, when they only think you lose, one think for sure, just let them know.....

    Bridge-Its taken hours and hours, to shake off the pain. But I can't change the awful stain. The only thing you should do, is take the dirt off your shoes, and stand up proud and shake it off.......<very good note

    Ending-Just make your mark, no one might have a clue, but I know I'll root for you. Just enjoy right now and shake it off.....

    Verse1-re-verse2-refrain-bridge-refrain-ending
     
  13. What type of beat did that rap have ? 2/4? 3/4? 4/4? 8/8?
     
  14. >.< Rita, as of now, I have no clue. What do you think?
     
  15. Lol it's good as a 2/4 cause it doesn't sound very good in 8/8 cause that's too fast 
     
  16. >.< well I hope it's good, I don't really do well on these, honestly.
     
  17. Nice raps! I can't rap for the life of me 