Am I a Superhero or a Supervillain

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *hiUrock (02), Jul 5, 2012.

  1. Uhhhhh, hi.  a little minor set back. There is a story, it's just I messed up and clicked the wrong buttonyea I'll start writing...
     
  2. Starts out slow, but it will get more interesting... trust me!

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    Nicole's POV:

    "Wake up, Nikki!" I heard my aunt, Jessie's weak voice scream at me from downstairs.

    "Uhhhh," I moaned, as I used all of my strength to pull myself out of bed. I looked around my pink, girlie room and sighed in descussed. I never liked my room and always wanted to change it. The pink walls, the stuffed animals, the old dolls that I never played with once.

    I quickly got out of my ugly pink gown my aunt passed down to me. I looked at myself and rolled my light brown eyes. It was very long and couldnt let you show off anything.

    I put on whatever was left in the closet. It had only pink flip flops, long light blue jeans and purple Dora shirt. "Are you kidding me?" I asked myself as I looked at the cloths I had to wear.

    I quickly changed, combed my sandy, long brown hair and brushed my teeth. Then, I walked downstairs.

    I saw my red and white striped walls and light brown wooden table. I walked to my aunt as she was cooking pancakes. I smelled the air and looked at the tan pancake. It was wonderful!

    "Jessie, go lay down. You look tired." I said. It was true, she looked pale, skinny and weak. She said, "Let me just sit down and I'll be fine." She left the old broke down oven and sat in a wooden chair at the table. The chair squeaked as she pulled out a chair.

    I took the black, old pan to my plate and tipped the pan to serve myself. I sat the pan back on the oven and turned it off.

    I quickly ate the pancakes and watched my aunt take a nap in the chair. I washed my dish when finished and looked at the time. I had five minutes left til the high school bus would pull up at my house.

    I walked to my aunt and sat next to her. I helped her to her bedroom and kissed her on her forehead. She was the only family I had left. My parents died in a car crash and the will said I had to stay with my aunt. My aunt never married or had kids. So, it was just me and her alone.

    I grabbed my backpack and headed out the door to the bus.

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    I hopped off the bus and quickly walked through the halls, avoiding and ignoring all the boys whistling and the girls going eww look at her clothes.

    I walked to my locker and opened it. A white little note fell out. I picked it up and throw it away. Because it was either a prank or a secret crush. And I didn't need or want either of them.

    I skimmed through the day until my fav class finally was time. I ran to my locker and quickly put on my pink tennis shoes. I ran to our coach/ PE teacher, Mr. Time and waited for his instructions.

    I saw a girl walk to me. She had short cherry red hair and green hazel eyes. She whispered so only I could hear. "Did you get it?" she asked me, softly. I looked at her with a confused look. "Get what?" I asked. I stopped talking as soon as I heard our coach speak.

    "Today, we are going outside to play jump rope. I know, it's not as fun as dodge ball... but we play as a team and work as a team," said Mr. Time

    We all walked outside and some ran with excitement. I picked up a blue jump rope and went to a place with a lot of space. I looked around and saw the same girl walk up next to me.

    "Hi, I'm Kacy." she said softly.
    "Hey, nice to met you. I'm Ni-" I was interrupted by her.
    "I know who you are and what you are," she said annoyed.

    I looked at her confused. She seem to notice, but didn't care. She looked like she was about to punch someone if they touched her.

    "Well, what am I? Cause apparently you know what I am and I don't. So, let's hear it."
    "You are Nicole and you are a super hero in training," she said, rolling her eyes as if I knew.
    "Excuse me? I'm a what?" I asked her.

    This is a prank, it has to be. I know for a fact I wasnt a hero and when I was little, I always wanted to be one. But I grew up, obviously this girl hasn't.

    "Wait, you don't know? You didn't get my note in your locker?"
    "What? That was you who gave me that note?"

    She shock her head rapidly. I looked at her long.

    "You should have read the note! You couldn't have been so stupid!"

    I looked at her with a pissed off face. Who did she think she was? She is a child who believes heroes are real or a prankster who wouldn't leave me alone.

    "Don't call me stupid! I am not a hero and u need to leave me alone or I will tell the teacher on you!"

    I expercted a 'tattle teller' or a 'whatever b*tch' or even a 'yea right', but all she did was walk away and leave.

    I started to jump rope and instead my feet went higher than expected. "What the?" I asked myself. I jumped again and went like 10 feet high. I jumped again and this time I went 2 feet and I landed on my face.

    Mr. Time ran to me and asked, "Are you alright, dear?"
    But couldnt hear him, my eye sight became blurry and I passed out.
     
  3. *disgust
    *clothes
    Sorry I can't stand mistakes 
     
  4. Well, I make a lot of mistakes haha
     
  5. Lol
    Keep writing!
     
  6. I can't, I need more comments):