Once upon a time

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *English-Muffin (01), Jul 4, 2012.

  1. Once upon a time






























































    The end
     
  2.  well.....um........good story?
    I felt like it was awesome, but it's kinda pointless, no offense.
    WORDS, MAN WORDS! I SEEK FOR ALOT OF WORDS!
     
  3. Silence can hold many words, young grasshopper 
     
  4.  I'm no damn grasshopper, I'm a word seeker.
     
  5. I loved the part when the man ate the chicken  Good stuff 
     
  6. I especially loved the part at the end where the grasshopper said the end
     
  7. Omg! This is the best story ever! I must tell the whole world this magnificent story to the world!!!!
     
  8. What a wonderful creation of man!!
     
  9. (notices a girl wrote it) I mean of woman!
     
  10. Brilliant!!! my favorite story yet! But one thing is try to make it a bit shorter, i had trouble reading all the words
     
  11. This made me tear up.

    Now, this is... GENIUS.
    Plain genius.
    'Nuff said. 
     
  12. This was such an amazing story took me on such an emotional roller coaster
     
  13. Greatest Story Ever
     
  14. NARWHAL ATTACK! 
     
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  16. too long.. Use less words next time xx
     
  17. I'm touched by your story!