Uhhhh that was it it was just a short breakup story Should I write more? Or should I write another? I wanted to finish that story I did before about the online relationship ( can't say the name cause I'll break the rule) your choice just message below ????
I like this story I think after your done writing the other one ou should come bak to this one and write more to it also could you wall me your other story??
-next day- "Hey Ashley, you want to go clubbing?" asked James as he sat on her fluffy pink bed. "Not really in the mood right now" Ashley replied whilst rubbing her eyes. James stared at her face and saw she had bags and red eyes "Ash, don't cry yourself to sleep for that bastard, I'm always here" he tried to smile. Ashley looked at him, she new he wouldn't shut up about the breakup "okay let's go clubbing, now get out so I can get changed." "Come on Ash, it's like I've never seen your body before" he chuckled. Ashley's face lit up red and blushed hard "that was when we were five idiot" she said whilst pushing him out of her door. 'Phew' she thought as she walked to her shower and got undressed. -after show and getting changed- -James pov- Waiting for her to get changed is like waiting for a blue moon to occur, I banged on her door "Hurry up Ash, it's 2pm and I want to go eat lunch before we go clubbing." "I'm ready, I'm ready" she said whilst opening the door. She looked beautiful. Her long chocolate colored hair reached he waist, her hazel eyes shined, she had perfect juicy pink lips. Without makeup she still looked perfect, I don't even want to start on what she is wearing. She looked perfect, just perfect. "wh-what?" she asked whilst blushing, only if....only if she was my girlfriend, I would never treat her like that bastard. "n-nothing, let's go" I turned away and realized, me, I was blushing.
Awesome story. I love the one character who lost his cool near the beginning, seems like me during sports camp
-2 hours later, after lunch- -Ashley's pov- I got out of the car and closed the door as James parked his blue car. Ugh why did I wear heels? Now I have to stay in these for the rest of the day. "Come on Ash" James said, Uh I love him, his been here through all the worst and boring times of my life, why didn't I fall in love with a guy like him but fell for a stupid heartbreaker? "Ya" I cheered for his sake, his such a good friend. We walked past the car parks and walked towards dark grey door into the club. The music was loud, James turned back and smiled, with his left dimple showing "Let's go" he screamed and grabbed hand. Looking around almost everyone was making out, I looked to the right and saw the bar, I grabbed James head from the back and pulled it. "Shit Ash, are you trying to kill me?" he argued, I pointed to the par and smiled. "I'll see you later" he smiled and left as I began to walk to the bar. I sat on a silver stool and waited for the bartender. He was pretty cute from the back, he had dark brown long hair, tall and tanned. "Hello miss, what would you like?" he asked as he walked towards me, he was cute and had a great smile "you" I stated but then broke my straight face as I saw his cheeks turn red "hahahaha I was joking" I couldn't stop laughing, he looked like a tomato. All of a sudden a hand grabbed my left shoulder and pulled me back "What are you doing here you stupid ugh" said a girl from behind "ouch" I had failed straight on the ass, and it hurt. "What are you doi..." I was cut when I saw the face of the girl, it was Masons younger sister, Melissa. "How can you do this" she cried, why is she crying? I got up and tried to touch her shoulder but she moved away and ran outside. Shit, I took off my heels and ran towards her. "Melissa" I yelled whilst running after her. Soon after she had fallen to her knees and her palms on her face. "Melissa, why are you crying? and what did I do? Your brother was the one who dumped me after me loving him so much" I cried...hard. "H...he didn't t..tell you" she said whilst taking her hands from her face. "Tell me what? He only told me that we shouldn't be together anymore" I sobbed. "th..th..that he" she cried again. sorry guys I didn't check for mistakes
-10 mins later- -Ashleys pov- I can't believe this, this bloody idiot, why didn't he just tell me. I guess he didn't want me to be over upset so he broke up with me. Tears were rushing down my eyes whilst I was rushing to the hospital -flashback- "Th...th....that he" melissa cried again. "Come on Melissa, I dont have all day, just tell me" I cried "tha....tha...that he has c...can...cancer " she finally said. My heart began to beat faster, my breathing became heaver, and I found myself running to the only hospital in town whilst Melissa was shouting my name from behind. -end of flashback- I finally reached the hospital, I probably looked like a junky but I didn't care, I walked into the main entrance and walked to a nurse, who looked disgusted at me. "What room is Mason Mathews in?" I said whilst rubbing my tears "Sorry but only family members can see him" she smirked. This ugh "I am his family, his my fiancé...was my fiancé." "I'm sorry but I can't let you go in" she said again, I looked at here and was about to get angry but I saw another doctor walking past and ran to him. "I'm so sorry, but do you know which room Mason Mathews is in?" I asked whilst crying. "Are you Ashley?" he doctor asked, shit how does he know my name....stupid Mason, he probably told them not to let me in. "Uh no, I'm Melissa.....his sister" I bluffed. "Oh okay, but you don't look like him" I cut him off "Yeah, we have different mothers" I faked a smile. We walked into a hallway and then stopped in front of a door which had the number "23" placed on it. "Here we are Ms Mathews, and don't worry he is in a stable condition" he smiled lightly. "T..thank you" I said whilst opening the door and closing it behind me. I walked closer to Masons bed and sat on the brown chair near the bed. I placed my fingers on his and rested my head on his arm "you idiot, you know I still love you...even though all the things you made me go through...don't ever leave me" I cried and eventually fell asleep.