Mephistopheles(Mephy)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by xXDankXx, Jul 2, 2012.

  1. Zephyr (POV)

    My life wasn't...good as people saw it.
    Yes, I was the cute silent type. No I wasnt moody like that Edward guy...fake vampire....
    Anyways...my name is Zephyr, pronounced like Zeff and Fear put together in an awesome way.

    I'm gonna tell you a little bit about what I do. I don't mess up on missions like Mephy.

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    I'm flitting in and out of dark portals. Its my of locomotion, I don't like to waste time. I'm no angel where I can just magically appear anywhere, we demons get the handy-me-down movement, so I have to find portals that are connected to the most evil of human spirits then pick another that is the closest to my target. You won't believe in how many evil people there are.

    I push through my last portal and makes it to a dirty log cabin in the woods. Typical mass murderer/violent womanizer/cannibal place. "Fun...." I snake my long tongue through my lips and wets them. The devil wanted me to kill this guy. We like evil, but we don't want too much so we don't piss off Go-...you finish the rest. Demons can't say the G word for it summons Angels to our location. Angels are a pain.

    I slither across the dead, brown grass. My arms tucked into my sides just so I can intimidate this HillBilly a little. Little known fact: hillbilly serial killers will still say the G word whenever they're in danger, ain't that funny?

    This man's house isn't at all stylish. Splintering dark wood all over the house, the steps up to the front porch doesn't look like something a 'welcome' mat could cure, and well he has two large dogs growling at me.
    I hiss at them to stay away. Dogs are stupid. They attacked immediately. I grabbed one by the scruff of it's neck then smashes it's snout into the dirt ground.
    The other dog digs it's fangs into my side. "Bad doggy!" I smile, bearing my large fangs then sinks my teeth into it's side before snapping it's leg then flinging it across the yard and into the woods.

    Told you dogs were dumb.
     
  2. Nicce! BUMP!!
     
  3. Zephyr (POV)

    I turn into a shadow of the night and slips under his door then finds the nearest corner. This man's room is dark, only a tv light is turned on. I slither on the floor and starts searching for the man. "Where the hell are you...?" I finally hear sounds coming from a floor below. Most obvious place to keep your victims, a basement. I push myself through the floor then drops onto the ground with no sound at all.

    "Pervert...." I say. This man has a naked girl tied up to the wall, he's perving all over her while nipping her with a knife. "Sorry man, but I gotta end this." I morph back into my regular self and smiles. "Cut her down." Get this! The guy actually smiles at me like he's in control. "Ok." He says keeping his smile, then grabs a large knife. "Cut her down?"
    "Yep, down boy." I chuckle. He frowns then swings her arm, the knife catching some of the light.

    The knife cleanly slices through the girl's arms and she screams in pain before hitting the floor.
    "You did say cut her down." He smiles then licks his knife.
    "I did huh?" I smile back before launching myself at him.
     
  4. *his not her
     
  5. Sorry readers. Not my best post, was rushing to put it out .
     
  6. Mephistopheles (POV)

    My human side aches for human interaction. Most of the people in hell are broken. Except for this one girl. We call her Arraign. Her name is why she's in hell. Look it up, it actually means something. Actually everyone's name means something....
    Anyways, I'm getting off track, sorry. Arraign is actually my personal slave. I hate calling her that, but she keeps bringing it up. Then the worse part of it she calls me her 'Master' which is true but it reminds me of who I call 'Master'.

    I'm laying on my bed, thinking...about nothing.... Arraign is sitting criss-cross on the foot of my bed. We're like friends, I guess. "Master, what do you want to do today?" She asks. I snap out of my daze and groans. "Didn't I say to stop calling me that?" I sit up and looks down at her.
    "Sorry, Mast--Mephy." She looks down at her feet.

    Arraign's clothes are that of which a poor slave wears. A tattered small dress that ends at her hips, the dress has no sleeves and it's black with dirt. She looks around the age of twelve. I thought...God gave leave for children under thirteen. "And to answer you're question, we're going to go explore the outside world for a bit." I say with a huff. Arraign's eyes lit up and a huge, cute, smile splits her face. "Really?!" She looked at me. I smile. This is why I like her, she makes me feel human again. "Yeah, really." I stand up. "Let's go Arraign."

    She likes going outside, because she gets new clothes. Girls.... I can't change into my old human self, but I can take someone else's body and gain their memories. It comes very useful when random people I don't know, but the person I devoured knows. Today, I give Arreign a dress. It's all black lined with pink and the frills at the end. It's nothing like from the Kingdom times, it's like a goth girl's dress, I guess. And for me! I take a African American's body, a pretty handsome African American if I do say so myself. I darken Arreign's skin a little, so it doesn't look weird to see a grown black man holding hands with a pale white girl. It's a very active night in Los Angeles. My hometown. Where I died. The Devil sure did do a number on Hollywood. Now it's just called 'X' since there's a giant dormant volcano in the dead middle. Yes I know it random, but hey, the Devil has a sense of humor right? ...Right?
     
  7. Awesome update
    It's really good
     
  8. Haha thanks Charlie 
     
  9. Lol love the theme of the story. Never read a demon story before :) great job! Don't forget to proofread!!!
     
  10. Mephistopheles (POV)

    Arraign and I walked around the town. It's nice losing myself demon self to my human half. Los Angeles isn't all candy and spice, with everything nice. We have our fair share of evil. It stinks. "Mephy...?" Arraign tugs at my sleeve.
    "What?" I say a little meaner than I meant to. Arraign shrudders and backs down a little. "Sorry...what is it Arraign?" I add a smile.
    "You seem...." She looks up at me with worried eyes. "Well you seem pre-occupied."
    I laugh. "No, tonight is my relax night, I'm not in duty even if I smell it."
    Arraign smiles. Then turns around quickly. Her smile fades quickly.
    "What is it?" I ask looking at where her eyes are pointing.
    "Zephyr...." She hisses.

    Something I forgot to mention here. Zephyr was Arraigns last Master. Let's just say he was officially named a sadist in my book, after I heard of what he did to her. "If he wants to start trouble he can, I'll just take him out." I finally see Zephyr. He is standing behind a group of people. His hair pulled over his eyes and his long tongue flicks across his lips. "He's not here for us, he's here for them." That relaxes Arraign. "Let's go home." I turn us around a corner. Evil, but wannabe evil. We call them evilites.

    Four men. Three are the muggers. One is the poor, slightly innocent, muggey. "Ey bro!" Says the one with the blonde Mohawk. "You want some trouble too?" I smile.
    "Maybe I do...." I push Arraign to the side gently. Mohawk, taps his other friends and they turn towards me.
    "That a fine little girl ya got...." Says the shortest of the three, he is showing off his crappy groomed Jerry Curl.
    "Touch her and I'll break off your penis then make you choke on it." I threaten.

    "Enough of this bull!" Says the supposed leader. "Get him!" They rush at me with knives, and blunt objects. Jerry Curl, or JC for short, whips a thick board through the air. I grab it then smashes it across his head.
    Mohawk expertly slashes his pocket knife at me. I give him a quick punch to the face before snapping his neck.

    The Leader was the smartest. He burnt off as soon as he saw his two friends go down.
    "Sic em Arraign." I look down at the girl. She smiles then runs after the man.
    I smile for a bit."What do ya want Zephyr?" A laugh that comes in hiss tone appears. Zephyr steps out of a dark portal.
    "You know with all this stalking me. Zephyr, some people might find it that you love me." I chuckle. Zephyr frowns. I can tell by how the corners of his mouth points down.
    "My love for you left when you were on the Devil's radar." He slithers over to me. "Why do you do this?"
    "Do what?" I back away. "Ten feat bro, your breath smells like rotting guts." I guess Zephyr ignored my teasing because he continue talking, keeping to his point. "You, walking among the living, why?"
     
  11. Very tired. I checked over it to look for typos n such. I saw some. If there are more, I am sorry . No more post for right now, time for me to hit the hay. Night my fans/readers. 
     
  12. IM AWAKE! But just for this one last announcement. I finally figured out a way to put pics on here! Anyways I'll be putting up the cover pic of my comics! It's not anything special.
     
  13. That's... Interesting
    I love this story though :)
     
  14. Love the story update
     
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  16. [ bumpity ] [ bump ]
    Will write more in an hour or two 