Hmmmmm u say your. a good writer, I shall read this story and WE WILL SEE! jk Cant wait to read it!
Comment on my story in here or on my story haha, I'm adding more characters soon sooo! That means I'll be asking for characters from you guys! isn't that KA-fricken awesome?
HEY 5MM fans!(5 Minutes to Midnight) I'll be gone for a couple of weeks (where I'm headed there will be no wifi ) BUT! I'll be back and I'll write more! So right now I'm taking characters for my story! So sign up! I need 2 humans and 1 female sphinx! [ skeleton ] Name: Clothes (include physical features): Height(if you're the sphinx you must be between 6foot and 7foot tall) Bio: [ skeleton ] [ end ]
No. I'm serious. Not to put you down, but I read your first chapter and it seriously lacked a lot of punctuation and the grammar was just... Meh. I'm just gonna give you a heads up to not call yourself a good writer. If it was a joke, then sorry. My bad. D: And that's just what I call criticism. No offense or hard feelings, bro.
XD oh yeah. Yes I admit I'm not the best, but I'm a little rusty xD. Plus it's way different writing stories than typing stories haha.
OH! And I'm doing another story (that I might not stick to) since I'm up and awake! Andi (a great writer) got me hooked onto a POV type of stories XD. So I'll be doing a POV. Yes it'll dark and twisted with humor. Yes the main character is a demon. But hey, he's a cool demon XD. Name is Mephistopheles (my interpretation) and I drew comics about him, and get this! Sold em to lil boys and girls for 50cents! Ain't that just awesome! Made about 30comics ending the series on the 30th one xD. So I have a story to go of off! ...anyways...yep it'll be called Mephistopheles, so look out for it! ;D
And the rest. :3 Criticism is criticism hun, take it, even if it might be crappy and blunt as hell, it will still help. Hopefully.