The Wizard Wars

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  1. Note: All characters, and places belong to JK Rowling. I own the storyline
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    Chapter 1• A new beginning


    "Alright there Albus?" my older brother James asked me as I sat next to him on the train.

    "Yes I'm fine I guess..." I said lowering my head.

    "Albus don't worry you won't be in slytherin it's impossible. I mean take a look at your father" Rose Weasly spoke in a soft tone."I mean it's not line I can be a slytherin either"

    "Yeah I guess you're right" I said a little more enthusiastically.

    And then the train began to start up and it pulled away from the station. I waved to my mother and father and to my little sister Lily who would be at hogwarts next year.

    "James you're a second year now....what was first year like?" I said curiously.

    "Ha! I'm not telling!" James said while he punched my shoulder."That's for you to find out little bro."

    Rose pulled our her wand and started fiddling with it. She looked like she was yearning for school. I knew how she felt.

    Just then James got up and started to walk out the compartment

    "I'm gonna go find my friends." he said and walked out.

    "Does he give you a hard time usually?" Rose asked

    "Yes very often." I said laughing

    "That's too bad because he's your brother. Now I never do that to Hugo." she said with a concerned look.

    "Yeah James is an idiot though he can't—"but I was cut off.

    "Well this is the son of famous Harry Potter." A boy with blonde hair and black eyes said from the compartment door.

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    Heyo this is my new story and hopefully it will be my first successful one. I hope you like it but the next parts will be longer I promise!!
     
  2. Chapter 2• Arrival

    "Who are you?" I asked looking at him in a cold way.

    "I'm Scorpius Malfoy son of Draco Malfoy" he said smirking.

    Rose stopped fiddling with her wand and fell silent.

    "Look I don't want any trouble so what do you want?" I asked noticing that Rose was uncomfortable.

    "If you stand in my way whatsoever on becoming the champion of the Wizard Wars then I will torture you our whole seven years here. Got it?"

    I stayed silent and just glared.

    "I'll take that as a yes" Scorpius said and left.

    "Wizard Wars?" I asked Rose quietly.

    "I dunno...it might be something new." she said with a puzzled look.

    "Look we're here!!" I heard a voice come from a different compartment and voices started springing up with excitement.

    "That was fast" I said looking out the window to see a beautiful castle in the distance.

    "Yeah that was" Rose said putting her wand away.

    Then the train stopped and kids and teenagers started piling out. And Rose and I were one of the first.

    "What do you reckon pulls that?" A boy my age said pointing at the big wagons.

    I knew the answer but I had to keep it secret.

    "Yeah I dunno" I said.

    "I'm Griffin Grubb" he said holding his hand out

    "I'm Albus Potter" I said shaking his hand

    "Hi I'm Albus's friend Rose." Rose said smiling

    "Hi nice to meet you" Griffin said as we got aboard a wagon.

    And the wagon began to move onto the dirt path with all the others. We reached the gate still going on about what house we all wanted and we finally arrived.

    The three of us stepped out gazing at the castle.

    "Wow" I said in awe.

    "That's what I said my first year little bro" James said out of nowhere patting my shoulder.

    We made it.

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  3. Bump!! I like it!!
     
  4. Punctuation is your issue.
     
  5. Chapter 3(part 1)• The sorting

    "So what are you aiming for this year Albus? To become super strong like your dad?" Griffin said laughing.

    Suddenly I liked Griffin. He seemed pretty funny and never dropped a conversation. He would become a great friend I hope.

    "No I'm just gonna be doing school normally." I laughed with him.

    "But I wanna learn what the Wizard Games are. I mean Scorpius sounded pretty serious about it." Rose said quietly while leaning forward.

    "Maybe they will announce it at our sorting." Griffin said

    "Hope so." I said

    We continued to walk with the pack of first years and made our way to the great hall doors. The doors were magnificent. Gold and shiny plus huge. It was crazy.

    Then the professor stopped us.

    "This is your home for the year until summer break. You will be sorted into one of the four houses. Gryffindor, Ravenclaw, huffelpuff, and slytherin. When sorted you will proceed to your house table for the feast." The professor spoke loud and clear.

    "Let's begin."

    And we walked in to a clammed of voices. Students had already been seated and were murmuring and pointing at some students. We stopped in front of a small three step staircase and a woman was standing at a podium with a roll of parchment.

    "Good evening. I am headmistress McGonnagal. You will sit here on this stool and I shall place the sorting hat on your head. Be warned you might not get the house you selected for yourself." The headmistress said unrolling the parchment.

    "Dexter Porter!!" She shouted

    An African boy walked up nervously to the stool and sat.

    "Hmm...let's see...RAVENCLAW!!!" The sorting hat shouted.

    A part of the students cheered and he was welcomed to his table shaking hands.

    "Charles Leo!!!"

    The small blonde boy walked up casually and sat on the stool.

    "GRYFFINDOR!!!" The hat shouted without hesitation.

    He also was welcomed with cheers and pats on the back.

    Rose and Griffin were also sorted into Gryffindor and Scorpius was sorted into slytherin.

    "Albus Potter!!"

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    Some minor fixes with punctuation
     
  6. :) Awesome. Wall me when you update.
     
  7. Thanks
     
  8. I will update tomorrow or tonight
     
  9. Do you like it though?
     
  10. Yea I love it and I've been waiting for jk Rowling to do something like this..
    So I'm really happy you did it
    It's really great
     
  11. Gee thanks that means a lot
     
  12. Chapter 3(Part 2)• The sorting


    My name rang out and silence filled the air. I began to walk slowly to the stool and sat nervously.

    "Oh ho!! Another potter we have here? Curious...maybe I should change things up a little bit..."the sorting hat said in my head.

    "Gryffindor please Gryffindor." I thought.

    "Hmmm well I guess you belong in...GRYFFINDOR!!!!!" The hat shouted to the heavens.

    I was relieved. I walked to the Gryffindor in silence just enjoying the cheers and congratulations.

    "Great job Albus!!" James said as I sat down next to him and Rose.

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    Chapter 4• The Wizard Wars

    "Now that concludes the sorting for this year. Congrats to our new young first years. And now our news for tonight...professor Longbottom if you please." Headmistress McGonnagal said stepping aside.

    Professor Longbottom was chubby and short with a funny haircut. I could hear Griffin across the table chuckle a little.

    "Yes good evening. I am the herbology professor to you all first years. Anyway we have a new event being held here. No it's not the Tri-Wizard tournament. It's called the Wizard Wars. This consists of 28 witches and wizards. Seven from each house and one from each year will be selected. Headmistress will explain the setting." Professor Longbottom said stepping back.

    "Yes thank you professor. What will happen is that all students not in war will be in the great hall continuing studies. For those who are competing, you will be in the castle running around attacking one another. But just note this is NOT a free for all. All houses are teams and you will work together or alone. But you will not attack one another. Now this war will last till end of year if it has to. You will know if you're eliminated because you can only be hit 7 times by a spell and you will be locked in your house common room till war ends. There is one war a week. They last for 6 hours each. Sign ups are in your house common room. Now have a good feast." McGonnagal said and sat down at the head table.

    I was in complete shock.

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