I'll lie with you, till the Nazi's come, yet we shall never

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Cherry1313, Jun 27, 2012.

  1. Ohh well!
     
  2. Leo? What the hell? Whats wrong with it?
     
  3. It's goodI strayed away from this story cause I thought it wouldn't be good until I saw who wrote itthem I starte reading it and love it
     
  4. Haha thanks!
     
  5. Nancy's POV

    Jam's cool hand slid under my chin and pulled my face towards the vicar. The priest sat on a wooden stool, his black cloak swished over the floor, he adjusted his white dog collar and gulped. Then he wiped his sweaty brow, the radio stood on the stone table next to him, he twiddled with the nob and a loud, crackling voice echoed throughout the church. It was Neville Chamberlain. "Over 90 lives were lost last night, within London," his voice was posh and covered in prejudice "We will pray for them all"
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    Hopefully you'll get an update l8er
     
  6. Yay! Another story from my second favorite author!
     
  7. Thank you MEJ!
     
  8. Jam's POV

    As everyone in the church clasped their hands together, closed their eyes and bowed their head, my eyes
     
  9. Cut off

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    My eyes glanced at the ginger devils, as I like to call them. We all murmured silent prayers, once this procedure was finished. I pulled Nancy up and out of the church, that's always our cue to leave. We ran down a slide street, skidding and laughing. We ran back along the road and up the path, hand in hand.

    Once we were far enough away from the public, I spun Nancy round to face me, my hands on her waist, she pushes herself up to my face. Then in one swift move, I picked her up so her legs curled round my waist and her arms linked round my neck. This is how it should be. This is good. And I'm sick of being told how to live my life.
     
  10. AMAZING!!! this story is incredible
     
  11. Yeah very good story..
     
  12. Leo? Why don't you like this story of mine?
     
  13. I do!! I love it! Iv read all your stories! and there great! Why would you think that?!
     
  14. Because your using this that's a sad emoj and you said ehh
     
  15. Ohh I'm sorry..! Don't take it that way!
     
  16. Btw I'm permanently silenced again
     
  17. Wow...why this time?!
     
  18. Bypassing on the forums
     
  19. Huh?! English?