I love it like I loved your other updatesI admit it's easier to read but it's still the same story and still really interestingbump
You know, sugar coating things is not my style. Please enlighten me how I could've said those things in a nice way?
You said be nicer about it. I would like to know how. Because if you tell me to do something, you obviously know how to do it yourself?
I don't really know how to cause I don't like being mean and criticizing. I just don't think that helps but some people think that it does work. But I don't so I wouldn't know how to say it nicer...
Don't tell me to be nicer then. Without my criticism, she would have not improved that last update. It would have been harder to read, and still grammatically incorrect, in fact I found some errors still. It seemed to work. I was not being mean, in my own perspective, I was criticizing. Because of this, the story got much better. Praising a story and saying it is really good, without pointing out the many errors is simply not going to help. Criticism is help. I've gotten it, used it, and improved! That is all.
I told her what needed to be done to it but I didn't bluntly say it like you did!!! That's the difference. You know what I got a few things you could have said you could have told her the story was good but the format could use some help!! Now she's probably not wrote more cause she thinks no one likes it!! Jeez there's a difference between criticism and making the other person feel as if they are not good...
Why would I say the story was good, when in fact it is another high school love story? I apologize for having my opinion of the fact, they just aren't good. I don't like the plot. It's overused. Simply over told. If you like it, good for you! It's my opinion. I respect your opinion, I ask that you respect mine.
I respect your opinion but if you don't like it then why you reading it?? Other people can help her fix her format and everything but year you satin that it's not good just bring the writer down.
I am reading it because I like to help people improve. The plot can be changed. And even if it isn't, I still like to help improve the writing structure.
Adam maybe you should stop being so full of your own writing, its great but ? And anyway, you are being nice and helping her, but then again she didnt fix it just from you telling her its bad ? Honestly, you shouldve said just what she needed to work on and leave it at that instead of saying its poorly written and boring, thats what i consider rude . Jsssss . - Sami .