Hey guys! I'm a song writer and a story writer and imma show y'all one of my stories! Hope y'all enjoy!!! ----------------------------------------------- There Alec sat like a trapped dog. It was the most boring place on Earth, his chamber. He was grown from scientific genes. Not necessarily a test tube but all he knew was he didn't know how or where he was made. It was all a mystery to him. He has heard and seen horrible, terrible things, screams, torture, and worst of all the gut wrenching gurgle of blood. The Earth or as he calls it "Junk Pit" is now polluted; it was polluted to the point to were the air was toxic to the human body function. There u absolutely no plant life or any life in this matter, on Earth outside our safe utopia. Basically what our utopia looks like on the outside is a safe haven. Food, hovercrafts, and shelter. However from the inside we can see what our ancestors have done to our once beautiful world, or what's left of it. Now I looks like a barren wasteland full of junk and toxic air. The utopia is covered with a thick layer of glass so we can see what our ancestors have done to our once beautiful Earth. Now it is the year 4013, our society was created in the year 2012, but that's just an old tale. One of the guys who work here rolled in a crate snapping Alec out of his thoughts. He studied the man carefully. The man has a scar across his face and barely any hair, he wore a white lab coat with dark baggy jeans. The man put the crate in the chamber next to Alec; the chamber Alec thought would never be filled. As if noticing it for the first time Alec looked to see what the man took out of crate. "Well Alec, its about time they got you a buddy to talk to." he winked at Alec. The man might as well be right. When Alec saw what the man took out o the crate hi heart race a mile a minute, his cheeks flushed a bright red, and his eyes went wide. She was beautiful. Her hair bounced like little blond springs. Her face was like an angel. But most impressive of all is her crystal blue eyes. It seemed as if she were to look at you her eyes would pierce through your soul to see ever thought, every feeling you ever had. She was beautiful. It was truly love at first sight. Alec was in love. ------------------------------------------------ Ok guys that's just the first chapter!!!! There's plenty of more after this and it only gets better!! So if u want me to keep going and keep updating the story just comment below what you thought!!! Thanks for reading!
Bump. It's interesting usually I wouldn't be in to that sort of thing but surprisingly I love it bump
Ok guys here's the new update! Enjoy! ------------------------------------------------ Alec sat there looking at her. He was memorized by her beauty. She had perfect porcelain skin, a face like an angel, curly hair like a blond sun, and wonderful crystal blue eyes. Alec didn't even know he was drooling until he felt a cold wet substance fall on his knee. Exhausted, Alec went to go lay down on his bed. Before he knew it he was in a deep sleep. It was cold and dark. Alec tried to see where he was but it was impossible. Someone touched his shoulder. "Alec are you okay?" the mysterious voice asked. That voice, that wonderful beautiful voice. Already knowing who it was, Alec turned around to see the person standing behind him. "As long as I'm with you I'll always be okay." Alec kissed her cheek lightly and smiled. Looking up she slowly reached for his belt loop never breaking eye contact. She smiled and pulled him closer. Signaling that she wanted him to keep going Alec kissed her fiercely on the lips. Without meaning to, a small moan of pleasure escaped his lips. She giggled a little against his mouth and wrapped her legs around his waist. Wanting her more, he put her down on what seemed to be a bed. So they were in a bedroom. Alec ever so lightly rolled on top of her. "Are you sure?" he asked in a whisper. "I'm always sure with you." she smiled and reached for the button of his jeans. Alec woke up in a cold sweat. Damn it! "Why did that dream ever have to end!?" sighing and knowing it was impossible for him to go back to sleep, he grabbed the sketch book laying on the floor next to him. After about fifteen years in here and the only thing to keep you busy was a string, a few pencils, and a sketch pad, then you get pretty good at drawling. Looking about the room for something to sketch, his eyes fell om the only interesting thing in here. Alec started sketching her. First her hair, her beautiful hair, then her angel type head, then her perfectly shaped small body. He wouldn't be surprised if two pure white angel wings were under her shirt. Alec couldn't help but smile, wondering what ELSE might be under her shirt. Chuckling, he looked at his drawing. It looked like an exact replica. But then again no one could ever replicate the beauty of her. Alec labeled the picture "My Angel." he said aloud while writing it down. Looking around the room for something to do his eyes feel apon a tray if food that must have been put there while he was in his lust filled dream. Alec looked at the tray studying it contents. Eggs, bacon, toast with jelly, and orange juice. As if agreeing with his thought his stomach growled. He started nibbling on a peice of toast and bacon he saw movement out of the corner of his eye. Suddenly not hungry any more, Alec rushed to the edge of his chamber. What he saw made his heart race. It was her, she was waking up. After two days she's finally waking up! Unable to help himself, he started fixing his hair, and brushed his teeth. Making sure he was presentable in the mirror, he watched her. The love of his life was waking up. He finally gets to learn her name, what happened to her, and how she got here. It was finally happening. ------------------------------------------------ Ok guys that's my next update and hope u enjoy it! My 3rd update will be soon. Remember comment below of what you thought and tell your friends to read Soul Mate if u likes it! What do you guys think Alec's dream girls name is?
I really like it, maybe you could do more detail on the surroundings and his movements, posture? Other than that it's fantastic.