And for your second sentence. 'we only comment what we think' Guess what?: so did Goldia. And for the rest of your sentences..... You can't just go back and fix the spelling mistakes and grammatical errors in this fanfiction forum. So you've got to do well in the first place. And sugar, please don't put so many dots after nearly every sentence. -Nightmare
Well I know that some ppl who write on here... Including me... Have it typed up somewhere else as well... I was only saying that I don't appreciate being told as a reader I should say more in my comment... That's all...
btw as i said before this is my FIRST story so its not the best one ever its probley not the best anyway i bet its really bad
Are you FUCKING KIDDING ME? Without criticism, you fools, the author wouldn't be able to improve. Editing. It is MEANINGLESS without improvement. And how can she or he improve without her readers' comments? Instead of empty words of encouragemet, I offered HELP. God damn, what the FUCK is this community coming to?
I'm not going into an argument. As a reader? Readers should offer help AND encouragement. Note the AND. Just blindly guiding the author without any words of improvement or advice, do you really think it'll actually help? OhmyGodIdon'teven—
I like it so far... I think it's okay... But I agree with Chloe, it needs work. It has grammatical errors, and there is no punctuation in your quotations. It hurts my eyes. I don't think your education has taught you to write that way.