After June, Before December 

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *RachelRebel (01), Mar 31, 2012.

  1. Bump!!!! Omg what happened 
     
  2. OMG. BUMP!!! I think I'm addicted guyz TO THIS STORY!!!I need help 
     
  3. UPDATE! THIS IS NO FUCKIN JOKE!
     
  4. Can you please update the story.
     
  5. Wow this scene Is getting intense 
    But I love it...hehehe *covers mouth*  I won't say anything else, carry on reading..*blushes* 
    Rachel's POV:
    I opened the door obviously, the lighting was very dim, I shut the door behind me because I felt awkward. I don't know jeez. I looked around and everything was cluttered and unorganized. I stepped over a few things, hoping nothing would crawl up my leg, then I checked what time it was, 7:43. I could hear the rain falling and all of a sudden thunder struck and the light in the room went out. You've got to be kidding.
    I froze with instant fear rising in my body, I flipped out, it was pitch black and I couldn't see anything, the more I thought of it the more nervous I got.
    I cursed out of how scared I was and used my phone as a light, then I tilted my phone slightly to look around and I saw a doll on a bookshelf with the most disturbing look ever, it's face was all demented, I gasped and backed up into a statue of this freaky clown and oh my god I freaking SCREAMED. I swear if you saw that thing you couldve peed your pants. I moved over, there was a window in the room but it barely had any light since it was night time, and the light came from the heart racing lighting and thunder. I was breathing harder and my heart pumped more.
    The door swung open, I felt terrorized and I gasped.
    "Hello?!" a deep voice called, I felt a bit delusional, was that jason's voice? The door shut. I got extremely frightened and tried to squint at the light source. I moved in a bookshelf aisle, slowly with slight curiousity failing to mask my uncomfortable feeling.
    "Who's there?" I said panicing, my voice was different, light and shaky. I heard footsteps moving and almost started to hyperventilate, I walked back around the bookcase and i turned around feeling something...no someONE up against me, which I instantly screamed at and I backed up slightly and tripped as I heard my named called from the person infront of me. Followed along with the sound of my yelps mixed with the blast of noise produced by thunder and lightning.
    The person was ontop of me as I started freaking out even more with noises of horror and despair.
    "R-Rachel, it's okay!" the voice said as a hand went over my mouth, I screamed more due to that and the shiny white eyes I saw.
    "Shhhh! Please Rachel!" the familar voice reassured, I breathed in and out harder as the person got up from me and I scootched back a bit and got on my knees.
    "Its me, Jason..." he said softly, I blinked confused and then with a hint of sadness. I felt so stupid and still shocked. I shrugged it off a bit when I realized Jason was with me.
    "Jason.." I said as he pulled me up, He dusted me off and whatnot. The thunder growled lowly. Finally we meet...I just didn't want it to be this way. But I don't care, as long as he's here.
     
  6. Ahhhhh I love this! I read it all today nonstop please post more or once your done make this a real book so I can reread and not have my iPod die every half hour
     
  7. BUMP!!!I agree
     
  8. Ohhh you want it to be a real book? Lucky you I have a book with the same two main characters but it's slightly different, but you might find it even better ^_^
     
  9. What's the other book called?
     
  10. Omg update guuurl :)
     
  11. Update please, are you a real writer. Because you should be, you are amazing
     
  12. Aww thanks and the book that I plan on writing Is called rescued. It's pretty cool 
    Now whos ready for an awesome beautiful spectacular romantic update?! 
     
  13. Rachel's POV:
    "Wow, you're not good with darkness are you?...scardy-bat." he said studying what was visibal of my outfit, I could feel him smirking somewhat.
    "Shut up.." I said smiling for a second, then I got slightly upset.
    "and where were you?!" I asked smacking him in the arm.
    "Looking for you.." he replied, I sighed with half relief and half uncomfort.
    "What did I do?" he asked curiously and slightly definsive, I looked at him.
    "Jay" I said softly, he got closer and stroked my head lightly.
    "I missed you. especially in all this darkness, I was so horrified. I shouldve never left my spot, I'm sorry but Alexis asked me to find a movie in here and everything was just ugh."
    "She set you up." Jason replied blinking his white eyes at me.
    "what? ...ugh I'm so stupid." I shook my head, everything so far has sucked...maybe I should just leave anyway. This is just a catastrophe.
    "No your not Rachel don't say that, and I'm sorry this all happened, I shouldve been there sooner. When my princess needed me." he stroked my face gently, I looked down and called his name. He softly took off my mask.
    "I was (dying) to see that beautiful face..." he smiled, his sharp teeth are so cute.
    "Is that why you look like that?" I teased, he tickled me lightly causing me to squeal.
    "do you know what I am?" he asked and I studied his outfit.
    "Sexy." I blurted out loud accidently, he laughed.
    "you're just too cute, it's starts with 'mon' and ends with 'ster', you tell me." he said standing back.
    "Oh Jason that's cool." I smiled, he blinked, aww I bet he expected me to seriously flip cuz I love monsters.
    "uh thanks." he responded dull, I looked at him. I caressed him with my hand on his neck and gazed in his eyes.
    "Jay you know Im thinkin way more than cool." I said teasingly, he put his hands on my waist.
    "yeah? Like what?" he whispered in my ear, I blushed and giggled. He stopped for a sec.
    "We should probably get out of here.." he suggested.
    "yeah no kidding." I replied, he took my hand and we started walking but it was dark and this place was like a maze, the lightning flashed followed by thunder. I lost grip of his hand and he turned around fast as I collided into him, I fell ontop with a scream.
    "aughhh..." Jason groaned, I blushed.
    "I-I'm sorry." I said nervously lifting my head up from him, he scootched back against a wall and I moved next to him swiftly and held his arm cuz as you know I hate isolation.
    "Woah there.."he smirked playfully, I bit my lip and looked around, I swear I saw something. He pulled me closer.
    "Oh my..did you hear that?" he said, my heart pounded.
    "W-what?!" I asked scared, he got in my ear.
    "I think I heard something..." he taunted, I got closer to him.
    "Jason you better not be-"
    "Shhh shh.." he said seriously while putting his hand over my mouth.
    "Oh my god..." he continued with wide eyes, "What is THAT?!" he exclaimed.
    "Eek!" I said, I didn't dare look. The thunder clashed and I crawled in jason's lap hanging onto him causing him to spazz a bit.
    "Well...Rachel , a little affectionate here aren't we?" he teased, I blushed.
    "Shut up I'm scared!"
    "Oh well I guess I shouldn't tell you that I think over there that's a-"
    "Ahhhh!!!!" I screamed again hiding my face in his chest holding onto him tighter as the thunder grew louder.
    "Jeez, okay I'll stop.." Jason said looking at me, I was literally shaking.
    "R-Rachel..." he asked concerned.
    "Jason I wanna get out of here! It's dark and I don't wanna die!" I blurted.
    "Rachel cmon it'll be fine.." he reassured, I shook my head.
    "No...I don't know what to do...it's so.." I started breathing harder, he tried to relax me.
    "Rachel..Rachel..." he called, I shook my head more and he finally took my face in his hand.
    "Look at me.." he said, my eyes slightly watered from fear.
    "Aw, Rachel please don't cry, it's going to be okay..." he said, I looked at him with the thunder still bursting around with lightning.
    "Jason please..." I shook my head "We've got to get out of here...! I..."
    "Rachel..."
    "Jason...I...I'm so Sc-"
    He stopped my sentence with a passionate kiss, this time on the lips. My eyes closed softly with astonishment as I felt him hold me. I could tell the lightning flashed wildly at this exact moment like on perfect timing but with a calm growl of thunder, the rain eased down too. It was about 6 seconds long...his lips caressing mine, his arm around my body and his hand stabling my face. He...kissed me. We pulled away an inch or two and I gazed in his white eyes that were glazed with consideration.
    "I love you. Feel better?" he said sweetly, I blushed harder than ever because I just got the effect of that kiss, not to mention those 5 words that might stay in my head forever. My heart beated too fast, I was scared it would burst, there was a ringing in my ears and my eyes grew warm.
    He stroked my face lightly with his thumb.
    "Jay.." I said right before we kissed again, I slid my hands on his chest with so much love running through my blood It felt uncontrollable, my face was still heated up. He took his hand off my face and wrapped around me as he leaned back against the wall. We kissed more without pulling away, long nice and slow, and it felt oh so good. He held me tighter, and I squealed softly. I guess this is how it feels to be in love. I know i've felt it before but each time it just feels so strong and amazing. There's nothing in the world that could stop that even if I died, his lips against mine, his sweet confessions, how I'm in his arms right now. What could ever feel so much better? Everything...everything I felt for him, everything I wanted at the time I have now. I have him, my prince.  I don't want it to end, it's like breathing...but instead of air I'm inhaling his love and exhaling all my doubts about it. Jason is so...I can't even describe his specialty to me, but I know...I love him so much. And he loves me back. 
     
  14. Don't tell me that's the end
     
  15. No pshh you know I have to finish the rest and include two dates they went on.
     
  16. Bumppppp I love it
     
  17. This is still fantastically greatly awesome!