I close my locker and lean my back against it, staring at a boy talking to three girls "Ugh man, there he is" I think to myself, "Will I ever let you go?" I scoff, of course I wouldn't, he is my true love, I know I am meant for him...but maybe he's not meant for me.... I laugh at the thought. I look down at my tiny feet(as my friend Matt nicknamed me) and laugh again and start walking to the bus, where I get my time with my lover. I smile and put my books in my gray backpack while I walk. I look around and think: I haven't seen my friend Shin or Grant around.....I feel arms wrap around my waist and I scream "AHHHHH!!!!" I hear laughter and I look around at the face "Hey Chloe hahaha didn't mean to scare you THAT badly" he does that same crooked smile which always drives me more in love with him "Well when random people start wrapping their arms around I'm gonna get scared, Michael" I laugh and elbow him lightly and he unwraps his arms, but walks by my side with some of his friends. "Oh my god, that math test was so hard!" I try and make small talk "Eh I guess, that last one I got 6, how about you?" "Hmmm wait!!! Yes!!! Yay!!! I'm a smart Asian!!" We both laugh and I try and keep my eyes on the passing buses looking for the one marked D....we finally make it to our bus and Michael gets in first and I do too. Eight graders sit in the back and seventh graders sit in the front and we head for the back. I look immediately at 2 of my besties Heather and Alyssa. We all scream like we do and Michael sits in the booth across from them, I go to sit with them but am taken down by someone yanking my backpack towards themselves. "And I'll be taking that" Michael says with a grin at Heather and Alyssa We all laugh and so begins the everyday bus ride of flirting and close encounters....
All readers are girls, did anyone else notice? I couldn't even read the whole thing because I already knew it was a cliche high school love story. Anyway, change it up a bit, before this story gets ripped apart by readers like me...
It's called criticism. What I hate most is how some people consider their story to be God's perfection, so they have the DECENCY TO REJECT SOMETHING THEY NEED MOST. Arrogance will get you nowhere. :/
Ok guys I'll update really soon!! Just have to make a smoothie for my older brother and I'll take ur criticism jeez calm ur pants, I please all my readers so don't lose faith in me lol
Oh hi there! The names Chloe, Chloe Darth to be exact. People tell me im a very loud person, and I agree with them hahaha. That's how most people know me, or if they say "Chloe the hot one?" Well I am a funny girl, always pleasing people and just being myself. I have chestnut long hair, born tan, dark brown eyes, tiny ears and feet, and people are always saying "Your so ripped, your so skinny" so yeah lol. Except one of my flaws is that I have short nails, but try and grow them. They arnt like disgustingly short but not over the nail and I'm really insecure about them. I also wear glasses but I have contacts I mostly wear, but hey a lot of people have glasses. Ok anyway, im an Eighth grader(school has 7th and 8th) and a pretty good student all around, just not very strong in Math -.- oh well I'll get there hahaha. I don't have any problems with teachers, and get along with mostly everyone. Anywho, I am in love with a boy named Michael. He's the cutest boy and I just love him, like really love him. I have known him since first grade and just have always loved him ever since. He's one of the populars but I don't care, he's like a brother but I wish more. We have always been close and I just- my heart races when I think about him. Everyone says "Chloe you can do better, Chloe he is all about himself and doesn't care about you" Well I have tried not liking him as much, but I can't ever let go....no matter how hard I try I will never be able to let go.....