Good writing doesn't start in the middle of a story. A good story needs to have a solid beginning, middle, and end.
Look I'm just a teen I can't be perfect. And this is still the beginning of my story. If you'd wait you would see the plot.
Most of us are teens... No excuse really... And, we don't look for perfection... Just correct writing techniques...
I'm trying. Have u ever noticed of u look at the stories on this list none of then no matter how many mistakes are getting there stories picked apart like mine.
It has potential, no denying that. But, it needs work. The author refuses constructive criticism saying it's just mean comments...basically. It could be great, with work.
NayNay, we get that you've been told you are a good writer. We don't need to hear you say it 50 times. You have what we call POTENTIAL. This piece is mediocre at best currently. If you take our advice, I guarantee you will get less criticism and more fans.
Criticism* That* Off* Okay, when at least half of your readers are posting advice and criticism, you need help with your story. And yes, you are rejecting our criticism. You specifically told us to stop reading if we don't like your writing because you won't change it. So now you're posting false information. Everyone needs help, NayNay. No one's story is perfect, not even PieSexual's (if that's even possible). Just take the criticism like a man, even if you aren't one.