As I opened the light pine door and entered the house I saw what no person should ever see... ~ever seen a house dripping with blood and empty bodies of once loved souls? Well I have!~ I saw the bloody bodies off all my staff laying there with shocked expressions... The worst part was at the top of the stairs lay a pool of blood, I cautiously stepped up the stairs which were once marble now a deep Red in colour. I followed a thick trail of stone cold blood through passages and halls until it went under a door... Which door? The door my parents room... I opened the door, my skin was White and my face wet from the tears, my hands were shaking as I gingerly binges open the thick oak door. Nothing... Nothing at all Yet blood had been spread on the Walls and hand print were imprinted on the cotton sheets. The blood stopped at the wall... "huh?"
Calla Dawnshed Age- 15 Personality- doesn't really like the big crowds, sticks for herself, just wants to be alone, but will be nice to the ones she trusts, Others- Is great with bowman ship and weapons, plus combat and strategy is something unknown, but she had a secret no else has, that gives the story a little twist.
Name:William Age:17 Personality:is quiet but knows TONS about weapons and things like that Others:was raised on a ranch and doesn't have a car he has a white horse with red eyes and a blonde mane his best weapon is a bow and arrow
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I like it so far :> but you might wanna use punctuations more, not just periods and stuff, but also commas. :>