Start of Something Good (Redone)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by HollyS, May 29, 2012.

  1. OHMYGOSH HOLLY UPDATE NOW!
     
  2. Bump! Sorry, been busy too!!! But I finally read the updates and love them!!!!!
     
  3. Update again please!
     
  4. Well y'all I'm leaving for florida today. I'll try to update while I'm there
     
  5. Okkkk have fuuunnn
     
  6. Ok I got home yesterday and I'm sorry I haven't updated. I'll get back to updating on Wednesday
     
  7. Peyton's point of view:

    Brightness.

    Bright white lights. Bright white walls.
    I woke up to find myself in a ****hospital bed of all the mother ****ing places I could mother ****ing be in I was in a god **** hospital bed.
    I moved my hand and as soon as I did I heard movement come towards me and I saw my dad's face.
    I could faintly hear my dad call for the doctors and they came in and took me off and I went under again.








    Sorry it took me so long I know it's short but I'm trying to get back in it
     
  8. It was great!!!!
     
  9. update!







     
  10. Peyton's waking up y'all!! Lol
     
  11. Peyton's point of view:

    *~*~*4 hours later*~*~*

    I slowly opened my eyes and closed them trying to focus everything and as I did all the blurry figures became clear. It was my mom and dad and my brother and sister and Zeke and Keeley and Madison and Taylor and..........Kate...

    I started to sit up but fell back down because of the god awful pain I felt. I looked back up to find Kate but when I did she was gone. Almost as if she was......never there.
    I kept looking at that spot while everyone was talking to me but she never came back in my room. I realized then that I had lost my one true love when I had went back to Mississippi for the last time. I had messed everything up with who I wanted to marry because I wanted her happy.

    I was stupid to let her go like that and I needed to fix it.

    But how?
     
  12. Oh My Goshh BUMP!:)
     
  13. Great updates! Bump