I love your story! Don't worry if it isn't attracting many people at the moment because it will attract more soon because of its quality. You don't know how refreshing it is to not see a fanfic that goes 'I'm a perfect girl and I have the perfect boyfriend but I think he's cheating on me or I think this is girl is jealous of me or but I have a secret magical power'. Keep writing! Don't give up on this story! -Nightmare
Wow! Just before I saw that review I was getting ready to quit. Thank you, really! I suppose I must get back to it then ^^
Utterly beautiful, Bravo, and beauty is a wonderful name. Always will love you and your writing! ~Toxic
Amazing. Just amazing. I am at loss for words to describe this. You're writing, it gives me a whole visual sense of what's happening, what you're hearing, and how you're feeling. It's like most authors or writers don't do that these days. The way you write just makes me wanna suck up this writer's block and finish all my writings to get it over and done with. If I can, I would just grab a glass if champagne and make a toast to you. Bravo!
-bites her lip and tries to hold back tears, completely flustered and waving her clenched fists around in circles- Oh geez I-- I don't know what to say! That was the sweetest review... thank you very much! I am honored!
It's something to be proud of Elysie! I have a hard time writing what I feel and what's really the thing on my mind when I write a story, but you blend it in like it's nothing! Kudos to you Elysie!