~*::Broken Boundaries::*~

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by MEGADETH_EMMMJAAAY, Jun 16, 2012.

  1. Annalyn's Pov

    "Annalyn! If you don't get up you're going to be late for school!" my mom yells from downstairs.
    My name is Annalyn Rivera I'm 16 years old. I have long black hair with bangs that sweep to the side, green eyes and I tower at 5'6, yes I am short. It has always been just me and my mother, Jennifer. My dad left when I was about 5 years old for his supposedly hot client and I honestly haven't seen him since then, and I don't plan on it either.
    "I'm up mom, calm down" I get up off my bed putting on some light coloured skinny jeans and a loose baby blue long sleeve shirt that slightly goes off the shoulder and I paired it with my favorite diamond butterfly necklace.
    "Do you want a ride to school today Sweetie?" my mom asks as I make my way into the kitchen grabbing a piece of toast off the plate she placed on the counter.
    "sure, thanks mom." normally she doesn't offer to take me to school on her days off so it was a little weird but I didn't feel like walking so I guess I can't complain! As we drive into the parking lot of my school I noticed my mom gripping the wheel a little to tight for my liking..
    "hey mom, are you okay?" I ask her worried. I waited for her answer but didn't get one. She was so busy looking at her surroundings with some kind of death glare. I tried to see who she was staring at but, I didn't see anyone that she and I would both know, or at least I didn't think so.
    "he's here" my mom finally said answering me. I look at her confused.
    "mom what do u mean? Who is here?" I ask starting to panic
    "Christopher."

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    And that is the first part! This is the first time I've written a story so please excuse my noobness in writing stories! Should I continue..? What do u think? And if there are spelling/ grammar errors please don't mind them xD but feel free to point them out to me hehe <3 thank u!
     
  2. "Christopher." my mom said before shutting up and urging me to quickly get out. "have fun at school hun! I'll pick you up after school. Love you Annalyn." with that she left. She left me there standing with a confused look on my face. I shrugged it off and started heading into the school.
    "Hey sexy girl!!" I turn around only to be tackled by my bestfriend Tianna White. Tianna is gorgeous! She has long wavy/curly dark chestnut colored hair, blue eyes, tall, and honestly has a nice ass!
    "haha well hello there beautiful. Why do u seem so excited??" I laugh and smile at her. "did something happen between u and your boy Kevin?" I wink at her and she slaps me on the arm. "ouch u little son of a gun!" I squeak at her. She laughs loudly then her face suddenly turns serious. I look at her and give her the 'what's going on' look.
    "Have you seen the new guy??" her serious face gone and now smiling like a fool.
    "well, I did just get into the school and was tackled by a monster of a bestfriend!" I roll my eyes smiling. She ignored my comment and continued on.
    "he is so H.O.T." she pretends to fan herself with her hand while laughing "if I didn't have Kevin I'd totally do him" she winks at me. I smile at her, I know she wouldn't just DO any guy and that's a reason why she is my bestfriend. She isn't like those other girls.
    "your such a dork Tianna, but now I kinda want to see this new guy" I say giving her a dreamy look but was then suddenly given another slap to the arm "what the hell Tianna?!"
    "I'll have you know that a dork means a whale penïs! And I am NOT a whale penïs." she says. I sigh and was thankfully saved by the bell. I walk into my first class, math. Math isn't the easiest subject for me but I still manage to get decent marks in it. I sit down in my seat middle row middle seat. As I take my book out of my bag I look up to notice this gorgeous guy standing in the front smiling. Is he the guy Tianna was talking about? I start to daydream about him instantly, he is deff H.O.T.
    "Ms. Rivera... Ms Rivera?!" I hear a ruler slap hard against the desk in front of me and I jump 10 feet into the air!
    "WHAT THE FU-" I Quickly shut myself up and look at mrs.Jones the math teacher. She clearly didn't look very happy with me.. What an old bag.
    " clean the drool off your face and into the hall... NOW. I'll talk with u later." yup she was pissed. I walk out with my head low and sat in the hall. Damn this is so the new guys fault.
     
  3. The one above and the next one are mainly just fillers :)
     
  4. "ms.Rivera I am not impressed with you at all right now." mrs.Jones says to me. "ms.rivera I am not impressed." I silently mock her. "your punishment is to show Damien around the school." I look at her with a 'wtf' look "Damien is the new kid in our class." she goes on with a boring tone.
    "okay sure. Why not." I said trying to sound annoyed and uninterested but really I am super excited.
    Class goes by quickly and before I knew it, it was lunch break. Finally! My time to have some alone time with this Damien guy. I fist pump in the air yelling out "score!!!"
    " you do realize people are staring at you right?" I look over to see Damien behind me and then look around seeing people give me weird looks and walking away. I blush "that was really embarrassing sorry." I say apologizing
    "don't be sorry, it was actually Kind of cute." he smiles at me and I swear I was in heaven.. Yeah that was cheesy but whatever! "I'm Damien, mrs.Jones told me that you are the one showing me around?" he continues and all I do is nod. A nod?! I'm so stupid!! "where to first?"
    We start to walk around the school showing him to all his classes on his timetable. Surprisingly enough we have every class together other than English. Maybe this is fate??
    "So where did u move from Damien?" I ask curious To know more about him.
    " I moved from Victoria " he replies
    "why did you come to Vancouver then?" I continue with my questions
    " well i use to live here already but then moved back to victoria then my step dad got a job here and so my mom and I had to move here with him. So far I like it here" he looks at me giving me his adorable smile. I couldn't help but smile back at him. "are you trying to interview me?" I stop and laugh
    "me? Interviewing YOU? Your crazy! Just kidding, Yeah I was. " I stick my tongue out at him and smile. Then suddenly he moves in closer to me... He takes my hand and holds it.
    "w-what are you doing..?" I ask my face burning up. He doesn't reply and takes his other hand and reaches into his pocket.
    "I want you to..."
     
  5. Bump~ maybe I'll just stop since no ones reading haha 
     
  6. No I wanna know whats gonna happen!!!!
     
  7. Yes, dear, remember you love me? ^_^ lol BUMP!
     
  8. Omg people are reading it  yay! Bump~ ill update soon 
     
  9. Lol, I'm reading it too. It's good what's goons happen next? Bump!
     
  10. UPDATE NOW!!! 
     
  11. Yes, I am reading! I love it seeerie'
     
  12. Lol apple I'm writing one right now! xD this will be the 4 update today! 
     
  13. Warning! This one is kind of boring! My brain isn't working properly.. So much things I need to study for  next one I'll try to make good tho! An it will be in Damien's Pov!
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    "I want you to... add your number into my phone." he sticks his tongue out at me And hands me his iPhone. I'm pretty sure he saw the look of disappointment on my face but Whatever, this was better then nothing! I take the phone from him and added myself into his phone and then I text myself so that I have his number.
    "here u go!" I hand him his phone and he just stares at it. "is there something wrong?"
    " yeah there is." he says
    "what did I do?"
    "you didn't take a picture of yourself for the contact photo" I pause and laugh
    "yeah no, I hate taking pictures!" as I say that he takes a quick photo and runs off. Where the heck would he have gone..? I only showed him half the school!
    Finally school ends and it's the weekend! I walk out of the school and run into the parking lot looking or my mom.
    "ANNALYN!" I hear my mom and got into the car. "how was school? Anything new?" I swear there is something going on with my mom.
    "well, theres this new guy at school, my age, and he is like super cute! I showed him around the school and we exchanged num-" I was cut off.
    "that's good hunny, but what is his name." she didn't even say it like a question.. It was more like a command.
    "his name is Damien... Mom are you okay? You've been acting pretty strange since this morning.."
    "I don't want you anywhere near that boy." I froze In place trying to process what I just heard. Then it hit me.. I repeated the sentence over and over again. That's just a load of bull!
    "mom you dont even know him!" I yell out to her
    "And neither do u!" she was right I don't know him. But that's not going to stop me. She doesn't know anything about him! I don't see why she would assume he is such a bad guy.
     
  14. Ohhhhh. Me lik too. BUMP