Psychology-101

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Elysie, Jun 15, 2012.

  1. Interesting. And very well written.
     
  2. How does my rp affect my writing?
     
  3. Thank you deeply to both of you nice gentlemen!
     
  4. Well love, it develops character, setting, creativity and so on. Role playing is a great lee-way to become a better writer so you can understand your characters more.
     
  5. Yeah sooo but i don't rp that good.
     
  6. That is bull s*** madam. Not everyone has the ability to come up with so many different chars and keep up with them. Be a confident writer, that us how you always become better. If you don't believe in the characters you made, they will be sad :( there will be flaws till you can love them and accept that they are wonderful even in their own twisted little way.
     
  7. Hahaha like how Cynthia enjoys singing while drunk? Lol jk jk
     
  8. Lol no! That's exactly it:) I stalk every now and then and enjoy reading the threads.
     
  9. Hahaha well my favorite thing to write bout is comedy action with a pinch of romance
     
  10. Should I put my story on now?
     
  11. Sounds lovely! I am heading out in a bit but why not! Go right ahead.
     
  12. Wall me when you get back then i'll do it
     
  13. Thank you love!
     
  14. Should I continue it?
     
  15. I ignore the woman's sharp stare and look up, and in a swift blink they are revitalized and reborn. I didn't notice, but my nails were scratching the desk. Even unconsciously I was tired of being here. I lived in a merry-go-round, everyday the same things followed on cue. My students must see me as a zombie with a invisible revolver pinned against my forehead. What was I doing here? I hate human beings. They are purposeless, sinful, lazy, and selfish. I found myself teaching this course to really understand the human mind myself, but so far it's bull s***. The voices in my head begin to scream. How hard I have tried to knock them back. How desperately I have fought to be a different person, to see the world in a different light. But the world is just a big trash can with us being thrown into it when a higher power decided he didn't think we were good enough. Why am I like this? My eyes glance down to my arm, and for a moment it looks cut and broken with blood and maggots spilling everywhere. I blink, they are gone.

    Beauty whispers, "...Proffessor?"
     
  16. So far it looks like your story has a rhythm. You know how like in any sport, I'll use boxing for example, we either fake our shot or punch, or time for someone to recover or time for someone to get in our view/range, or use combinations to penetrate one side just so the part is exposed? It sends me that kind of sensation. I know it doesn't make sense to you but it's the first thing I felt reading.
    Good writing regardless! Love the philosophical references.
     
  17. Wow! That was a striking review! Flattered. I like that. But thank you. Still very rusty, but working on it. I just let myself type without really thinking about it, not sure if that is good or bad so far. But yes, good catch. It is supposed to have a strange rhythm just like our thought process. Random. Thank you again!