Am I?

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Takon (01), Jun 12, 2012.

  1. You told me you loved me you told me you cared
    You told me I was the one you told me you didnt let go

    Am I invisible am I just there
    Am I your fall back guy
    Am I scared

    You told me to be yours
    You told me to care
    You told me to hold you
    But you don't care

    Am I invisible am I just there
    Am I your fall back guy
    Am I scared

    You promised to be mine you held me close when you pronounced it
    You told me I was you life then you left me

    Am I invisible am I just there
    Am I your fall back guy
    Am I scared

    You told me you cared you told me to stay but now your with him I don't can't stay
    You broke my heart over and over
    This is it the last god bye

    Am I invisible am I just there
    Am I your fall back guy
    Am I scared
     
  2. S should I send this to the girl I like ... I need advice on wether I should or shouldn't
     
  3. Naw this is so cute. 
     
  4. It's a poem ?
     
  5. Just something I wrote
     
  6. No, don't send it. My reason being: You can't have any sign of weakness. Be strong! Let her know you can stand without her just fine. She'll know what she did wrong.
     
  7. I agree. Strength is better, unless she broke your heart. Chose something like the things that you like about her or what you would promise/do if she said yes or whatever. I know this sounds mushy but make sure it comes from the heart.
     
  8. Ur one to talk Blood...

    I'm not really in the mood to tell you peoples why I'm always sort of slow responding
     
  9. ? Is that a bad thing?
     
  10. No it's good sometimes...if people don't talk and then start to talk but if you already love to talk then its still good