POV: EXPERIMENT 3085 Darkness masks the light of the moon, the air seems chilly and I can't help but notice someone following me. Maybe I'm just being paranoid tonight.. I glance back trying to make out this stranger following me. He seems to be looking down at the ground every time he passes a street light, his hair shines bright like the sun. His steps seem to be increasing when mine are, but yet he stays a distance. I zip up my black jacket and pull my long hair to the side so I have a clear view when I look back. I tighten my grip on my leather shoulder bag..something doesn't feel right.. Why didn't I see this happening, he must be altering the future making me see something that will never happen. I quickly scape my surroundings, I notice security cameras and an ally up ahead. if I can get there I can do something about this guy without catching any footage on the security cameras. A light breeze of cold wind blows my brown hair back and sends a chill down my spine. When I reach the ally I quickly turn into it, I'm trusting my instincts on this one please don't let me down. Then I hear a laugh he speaks, "We found you experiment 3085." I start to think 'WE'. Hands tighten around my arms holding me back. A woman figure walks out from the shadows, it can't be her, it couldn't. She lifts up my sleeve exposing my marking of a moon and injects a needle into my arm, "Night night princess." I thought she was on my side... Our side.. ------------------------------------------- I would love criticism on my story, if I should continue or if I should just stop. Would love character suggestions and label this mysterious woman!!!! This is my 1st story! Much appreciated that you read! ------------------------------------------
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