I wake up to my alarm clock, slamming the snooze button, I hop off my bed. Yes, today was my sixteenth birthday, it was finally here. I wanted it to be special, unexpected, but most of all magical. I giggled as I crossed off August 22 and circled August 23, my special day. I carefully planned my outfit, after an hour of flipping through my closet I found the perfect outfit. I slipped on a cute purple mini skirt and black tank top and topped it off with purple converse boots. I laced up my boots an hurried downstairs to grab a special k bar and orange juice. "Happy birthday sweetie, oh Veronica it seems like just yesterday I was potty training you." My mom pulls me into a gentle hug and starts crying. I groan "Mom can you please not get tears all over my top," I push her away and run out the door. My mom has always been emotional since dad died. I feel bad pushing her away like that, but I didn't wanna join in crying, besides this day is supposed to be perfect. I walk into the doors of Burlington high and walk over to my friends as they call me over. "Hey V happy birthday," I smile at my best friend Anna. "Thanks An," I flip my perfect brown hair and it falls to my waist. I apply more chap stick to my perfect cherry lips, that's when I see him Lee. I smile as he walks up to me. "Hey V, I heard it was your birthday and I thought maybe I could take you out tonight," he shoves his hands in his pockets looking nervous. "Yea sure I'd like that, actually I'd love that." I smile looking into his perfect hazel eyes. He flips his perfect blonde hair, I check out his amazing features. He was defiantly someone I'd go gaga for his perfect tan, blonde hair, and hazel eyes were only parts of his amazing body. He smiles relaxing "Great pick you up at seven tonight you and me dinner," he walks away with his friends. I look back at my friends faces all of them completely shocked. I smile "What?" "You just got asked out by Lee, the hottest football player to walk this earth," Anna states eyes wide. I giggle "I guess it's just my lucky day," I walk to the bathroom locking the door, I fix my hair and make up. Something in catches my eye, I whirl around until I'm face to face with my dead grandma. "Gra-Grandma?" my eyes widen. "Veronica, sweetie you must fulfill your destiny, find the hunters it is your destiny to keep your kind safe," her ghostly voice rings out in an urging tone. "What? I'm seeing things.. Grandma how can I see you? Your dead aren't you? Why can I see ghosts?" I spill out all my questions trying not to choke on my tears. "Your ancestors are gifted with special powers, your a witch," What do you think? Should I continue? Is it bad am I a bad writer? Please be honest also I need sign ups and many bumps please criticism recommend
Adam, you love detail. But yeah, it could use some. I think you should add italics. I love italics. I'm not sure why... But it's great so far!
Italics is Insert text here [/i*] Just remove the asterisk so it'll look like this Colors are insert text here. [/color*] Just romeove the asterisk So it'll look like this There are like 200 colors Bold is insert text here. [/b*] Just remove the asterisk. So it'll look like this! Size is Insert text here! [/size*] The sizes only go to 200. So it'll look like this! But on size and color, you don't actually put the size or color you used. And make sure you spell color, 'Color' not 'Colour'. If you want all the BB's, go to -JordanMooCow- 's guide to all BB coding in the Questions/feedback section
Italics is [i*] text here. [/i*] Bold- [b*] text here. [/b*] Color is [color=Lime*] Text here. [/color*] But like I said, Jordan moo cows guide rocks.