Awesome, that you love the idea. (the update) it doesn't matter that it's short it builds suspense. Makes the reader question what is to come. Great writers take time, as their audience becomes ever more adoring of the writers talent. But, paradise is locked and bolted we must journey around the world to see if perhaps the back door had been left open. LP
Thank you guys so much! I'm sorry I couldn't update today, but i had a sleepover last night so i was tired all morning. Then my sis left for europe with the band, and then i went to the library... Now my mom and i are about to watch a movie...
Bump means bring up my post That basically means you just say that to keep this story on the first page. You say it if you really like the story.