Operation Popular

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Lil_Miz_Innocent, Jun 10, 2012.

  1. December 12
    Okay, so we have been here for three months now and i hate it. guess what else?..... Mom just got me this diary. Its supposed to make up for her moving us to this STUPID town Walterboro. Really? Who names a town that. Anyway , in case you haven't noticed by now, I am a rich, snotty, rude, girl. The queen bee. I was anyway. You know how the most popular girl in school is always smart and her "sidekick" is always sooo stupid, well that was my case. key word ... was. Now, im the second popular girl in school and I HATE IT. I mean Kassidy is sweet and all, but she is a total dunce. I deserve to be the most popular girl in school. And mark my words, I will become THE MOST POPULAR GIRL IN SCHOOL!!!


    How is it? Should I continue?
     
  2. The plot is a bit...cliche... And weak.