The Truth Can Hurt

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -Miss_Author_Shana_Alana-, Jun 7, 2012.

  1. Raychel was my character.
     
  2. The secret love or the son of Nat and Kyle?
     
  3. Idk...both i guess... I just LOVE this story!
     
  4. Ahhhhh *bumps to first page*

    UPDATE WOMAN UPDATE!
     
  5. Update, my loves!
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    Jason's POV

    I listened to Rory explain how Algebra works. I nodded where I understood an questioned where I didn't. Being the perfect pupil. Finally I exclaimed, "I am starting to get it!"
    "There you go!" she smiled. Her smile was a million diamonds. I smiled back softly and leaned in. I was going to kiss her! And then she said, "Whoa, what are you doing?"
    "About to kiss you," I said in a daze. Then she slapped me, hard, right across the side of my face. I recoiled and held my face.
    "Never do that! Ever! I don't love you anymore, remember?" she asked. "Do you remember what happened at the end?"

    Flashback

    I was sitting at table, waiting for an old friend of mine, Madi. She and I were friends in the first grade but she left in second. I finally saw her at the local supermarket and decided to catch up with her.
    I saw her come back with a huge smile on her face. Her blonde hair was jumping with every step she took. She sat down and asked, "So, how have you been, J?"
    "Good! I have my girlfriend, Rory, good friends, and happiness," I smiled. At the time I was truly proud of Rory.
    "Rory? Last name?" she asked.
    "Penski," I smirked.
    "Oh, you mean Cara's daughter?" she asked with a bigger smile.
    "Yeah. Amazing lady, Rory is. She's just the best thing that's ever happened to me."
    "I'm happy for you," she said as she placed a hand on mine. Bad timing.
    "What is going on, Jason? Who is this- this- this-" I heard. I turned my head and saw Rory.
    "R-Rory?" I stuttered. I pulled back my hand and stood.
    "Oh! So this is the famous Rory?!" Madi exclaimed.
    "You, hush," Rory hissed. "You," she pointed at me, "outside, now."
    I followed her outside, head hanging.
    "What in the world are you doing?" she hissed at me.
    "Just having a coffee with an old friend," I replied.
    "Oh, sure you were," she said.
    "What? You don't believe me?" I could hear my voice raising.
    "NO! I don't!" she exclaimed angrily. Her voice started raising as well.
    "WHY DON'T YOU?" I yelled.
    "BECAUSE! SHE IS A BEAUTIFUL BLONDE! ALL GUYS PICK BLONDES!" she yelled back. I could see tears starting to fall down her cheeks. But at that time I didn't care.
    "BUT YOU KNOW THAT I WOULD NEVER DO THAT!"
    "I DOUBT THAT!" Our shouting started drawing a crowd that was staring at us. And we kept on like that for about five minutes. Then it ended with my words.
    "QUIT BEING SO MUCH LIKE A BABY! YOU KNOW YOU ARE ACTING LIKE THAT RIGHT?!"
    "YOU KNOW WHAT? WE. ARE. OVER!" she yelled and ran off. I wanted to follow her but I felt a soft hand hold me back. I turned my head and saw Madi with tears in her blue eyes.
    "It's been done," she said.

    End of flashback


    "Right. Sorry," I said and stood. "See you tomorrow," I said as I packed my stuff. I walked out of her house and walked to mine. Terrible, just terrible.
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  6. Who wants an update?! Here it is!
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    Rory's POV

    I slammed my door when Jason left. Dammit, why did he have to do that! I sighed and lied on my bed. I heard the doorbell ring and Carson yell, "SIS! COULD YOU GET THAT?"
    "YEAH!" I yelled back and got up with a sigh. I opened my door and walked downstairs. I walked to the front door and checked to see who it was. I saw Jordan. I jumped up and down in happiness and opened the door.
    "Hey, you," he said, leaning on the threshold.
    "Hey, you. How are you?" I asked.
    "Good, love. How are you?"
    "Angry."
    "Aww... Do you need cheering up?" he asked with a smile. I nodded and he came in. His put his arms around me and gave me a big hug. I melted in his arms and closed my eyes. I broke from his embrace and took his hand.
    "Better?" he asked.
    "Not quite," I replied with a smile. I pulled him to my room when Carson yelled, "Who is it?"
    "Jordan!" Jordan yelled back with a smile. Carson was one of the four people who knew about Jordan and I. The others are my parents and Caroline. If anyone else knew, there would be a mob! Jordan was the most popular guy in school and every girl would kill for him!
    I heard Carson's footsteps and he came in wet and in a towel.
    "Oh, good God!" I said and hurried upstairs laughing.
    Jordan was still talking to Carson when I was almost to my room. I turned on the hall light for Jordan an yelled down, "J! Hurry up!"
    "Alright, babe!" he yelled back. I closed my eyes and smiled at his deep voice. Jordan had chocolate brown eyes and black hair. His parents were friends of my parents and their names were Nat and Kyle. Hell, almost everyone's parent's were friends of my parents!
    I watched him come up the stairs and I ran to my room giggling. I loved to tease him. I hid in my closet, my favorite place to hide.
    "Hmm..." I heard. "Where is my sweet little Rory?" I giggled quietly. He opened the door and I said, "Found me!"
    "Indeed I did," he replied. "My prize?"
    I gave him a big kiss and he smiled.
    "Mmm..." he said. I giggled and wrapped my arms around his neck. He picked me up and lied me on my bed with him on top of me. I smiled and kissed him. I heard, "How adorable. My little sister and her guy, just adorable."
    I turned my head and saw Carson with a huge smile on his face as he leaned on the threshold.
    "Aww! Carson!" I whined.
    "Babe, let him enjoy the show," Jordan kissed my cheek seductively.
    I giggled. "Don't do that to me, J. You know I can't say no when you do that!"
    "Do what?" he asked innocently. He kissed my nose seductively.
    "That!" I smiled. "Don't do that!"
    I heard Carson laugh and shut the door.
    "Finally!" I exclaimed with a laugh and I turned my head back towards him. Jason laughed with me and gave me a seductive kiss on the lips.
    "Jaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!" I called quietly. I was in a total daze by then with the seductive kissing from Jordan.
    "Yes, Rory?" he asked innocently. I just laughed and kissed him. God, the boy was the sweetest and the biggest tease!
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    Just for all you romance freaks out there!
     
  7. Yayaayayyaya romance!!!
     
  8. I love this so much!

    One piece of criticism:

    The whole breakup seen happened too fast. The way you described it, it seemed like it would have been over the course of a minute or two. That doesn't happen. I think you rushed into it a little.


    Other than that it was AMAZING... As usual...
     
  9. Sorry, lindsey! I just wanted to hurry it do I could keep goin wit the story! Well, here's an update that might remind you a bit of one of our favorite nut balls!
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    Jason's POV

    I walked inside and I heard my mother say, "Jason! You home?" I smelt food. That's all I could think of, food. I walked into the kitchen, eyes closed and in a daze. I ran into the threshold and fell on my ***.
    "Ouch?" I asked and opened my eyes.
    "Just like your father," my mother chuckled.
    I stood and walked into the kitchen, seeing my mother.
    "Hello, Mom," I smiled. "What's cooking? And where's Dad?"
    "He's with Cara and Josh on their business trip. And I'm cooking soup, it's you favorite!" she replied with a smile.
    "Where's Sarah?" I asked.
    "Oh, dammit!" she said dropping the spoon that she was stirring with and took off her apron.
    "You forgot her again, didn't you?" I asked.
    "Yes, I did! Dammit! Oh, pardon my language, hun." She smiled at me and ran into the other room. I heard her scramble for her stuff. "Stir that slowly clockwise!" my mother called to me.
    "Alright," I called back and started stirring. I took sips frequently to taste. Man, it was good. My mother was an amazing cook!
    After twenty minutes I heard the door open and my sister babbling on about a bunch of nothing. She came in with her cheer uniform on and her pom-poms in hand.
    "Brother!" she exclaimed. "Your cooking? My lord, little brother. It's amazing!"
    "Shut up! I'm just helping Mom," I replied with another sip of soup.
    "What are you doing?" my mother asked.
    "Tasting and boy, is it good!" I replied with a smirk.
    "How much?" she asked.
    "Take a look," I replied. It was about halfway finished. She took a look and groaned.
    "Dammit! Pardon my language." she grabbed ingredients and said, "We are going to have a bit of a late dinner."
    "Sorry, Mom," I said with a smirk.
    "Way to go, little bro!" Sarah exclaimed and walked to her room angrily. I just chuckled and walked upstairs to my room. I checked my phone and saw seventeen text messages. I groaned and saw seven were from Veronica. Three were from my best friend, Jordan and the rest were about a bunch of magazine renewal for my sister.
    I read Veronica's texts. They showed how needy she was. Then I read Jordan's texts. I replied and waited for an answer but I didn't get one. Then I heard my mother an hour later yell, "Dinner's ready!"
    "FOOD!" I yelled and ran down stairs. I jumped into a chair and fell over with it.
    "Ouch?" I asked.
    My mother laughed. "Just like your father when he was your age!"
    "Really?" I asked and groaned as I got up. I picked the chair back up and sat down in it.
    "Really," she replied and sat down. I sat and had my soup as Sarah walked down the stairs.
    "So, what happened today, Jason?" my sister asked when she walked in wearing a shirt and jeans.
    "Well..." I started. I told them the interesting parts of my day, not including what happened with Rory at her house or at school. I wanted to leave that out and never think of it again.
    "Hmm..." my mother said. Yep, just a normal day a home.
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    Oh, Jason! So much like Rob!
     
  10.  I had to add the part where he yelled out "FOOD!"  I seriously just had to!
     
  11. Like father like son...
     
  12. Lol. He can't cook. Bump
     
  13. Update time, my lovely readers!
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    Rory's POV

    We continuously kissed each other for the next thirty minutes. That's all we did as I giggled and called to Jordan softly. He kept teasing me and I wanted to shove him but I knew I couldn't.
    "Aurora! Carson! We're home!" I heard from downstairs. It was my mother's voice!
    "Mom's home!" I exclaimed! "And that means Dad is too!" Jordan rolled off of me and I sprang up from my bed. I ran out of my room and downstairs. I saw my mother and father and I ran and gave them a hug.
    "Rory!" my father exclaimed and hugged me back.
    "Dad! Mom! How was your trip?" I asked. I was jumping up and down waiting for an answer.
    "It was good, as usual. Where's Carson?" my mother asked.
    "CARSON!" I yelled.
    "WHAT?!" he yelled back.
    "MOM AND DAD ARE HOME!"
    I could hear him running to come see them. I saw him, hair partially wet, run and hug our parents.
    "Mr. and Mrs. P," I heard from the stairs.
    "Hello, Jordan," my mother smiled.
    He came up behind me and hugged me around the waist. I laid my head on his chest and smiled at my parents.
    "How have you guys been?" my father asked.
    "Good," my brother said. "And some people have been having a little fun," he added with a smirk.
    "Carson!" I whined. Jordan laughed and kissed the top of my head. I relaxed and closed my eyes when he did that and the rest of my family took notice. They laughed and smiled at us.
    "So much like your father and I were when we were your age," my mother smiled and leaned on my father.
    I blushed and Jordan said, "What an analogy."
    "I'm going to go back upstairs," I said, still blushing. I released myself from Jordan's grip and started upstairs. I heard footsteps behind me and someone pick me up bridal style.
    I yelped and saw it was Jordan. I giggled and he kissed me. I blushed. "Jaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!" I called quietly. "My parents are right there!"
    "So?" he asked and started carrying me upstairs.
    "So, I don't like you kissing me in front of them!" I replied.
    "Hmm..." he said and kissed my nose seductively.
    "Don't do that!" I moaned.
    "Do what?" he asked.
    "Tease me!" I exclaimed.
    "Oh, you know you love it!" He kissed my lips and walked into my room.
    "So? What if I do?" I asked with a smirk.
    He laid me down on my bed. He pulled off his shirt and I saw his abs. I moaned. "Don't tease me!" I exclaimed. I started poking his abs sillily.
    "I will," he replied with a chuckle. I kept poking his abs with a goofy grin on my face. He smiled and got on top of me, pinning my arms down.
    "Aww..." I said and frowned. He kissed me and I moaned.
    He leaned next to my ear and asked, "You know I love you, right?"
    "Yes," I replied with a moan. "I love you to, J."
    He chuckled and kissed me again.
    "Such a tease!" I exclaimed against his lips.
    He laughed and he got off of me. He wrapped his arms around me and pulled me close. We laid there likes long time like that and he teased me by kissing the back of my neck. I shivered when he did that and moaned. I told him to stop frequently but he wouldn't listen. God, I loved the boy.
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    More romance for the romance freaks out there!
     
  14. Im one of the romance freaks
     
  15. Aha I'm here for ya honey!  Always! 