Awesome and thank you so much but my real name is Destiny so you could call her that everyone I know should know my real name
Thx everybody My Muse is not coming 2 me But once it returns there will be plenty of long updates as a promise
They love eachother? They just met earlier that day! Not possible. You're a good writer, but I don't this kind of story suits you.
I don't really write this stuff, that's true. This is one of my first love stories; so it's not the best. In real life I write non-fiction articles for my school's newspaper. The head reporter wanted me to try something new, so here it is. -------------------- I'm sorry for not updating lately. Exams are going on, I don't have much time for fun. Thx for waiting.
Stella's POV: ......and I pushed him away. He had gone far enough for now. I looked him over again, he was so perfect. I noticed something, he had an odd marking on his pointer finger of his left hand. It looked sort of like a marking, it wasn't a tattoo or a scar. Somehow it looked familiar to me, yet I wasn't able to remember it. I wasn't close enough to see it very closely, but it looked like a snake. I began to walk a bit faster, and said "We better hurry up, it's starting to rain." I felt the wet, cold raindrops on my shoulder. I looked at him, he was staring into the distance at some animal. I shook his arm gently, "Snap out if it, it's starting to storm!" I said as I heard thunder in the distance. He looked up, and it began to hail. I remembered a poem I made in second grade when we were stuck in side school during a hailstorm: Mom and Dad are home I'm here playing with foam The hail falls down Down, down, down I'm stuck at school And I'm not any fool Because I'm going to die Good bye, good bye See ya later, suckers!!! Not the best poem, but my teacher had wanted a poem, so I gave him a poem. I broke into a run as I felt the hail come down faster and faster, like a dog chasing its tail. I think I must've have slipped on something; everything started to go black..... Eli's POV: I looked back and saw Stella slip and fall. I instinctively ran back, covered her with my jacket, picked her up (she was surprisingly light) and ran as fast as I could back home. It seemed forever until I got home. I lay her down on the sofa, and was greeted by my mother "I was worried about you!" she gasped "Once it started to hail and everything..." Her voice trailed off once she saw Stella lying on the sofa. "Call the hospital" she said "I think she's hurt." --------------------- I'm probably rushing into things way to quickly. Oh well... Let me know if you want Destiny (Cherry131) to be an enemy or Stella's friend. Feedback is appreciated and thanks for reading!