left for deada zombies tale

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *izzy_wizzy (01), Jun 7, 2012.

  1. My name was penny Clinton, I had a perfect boyfriend and family... Things at school were great until that day...
     
  2. ZOMBIE APOCALYPSE!!!
     
  3. It was a sunny day, I got out of bed and made some toast, after I made the toast and ate it... I got ready and put on my shirt, tie and skirt.
    I heard a knock on the door and ran downstairs...
    "micheal!" I said as I burst out a smile!
    "penny, my babe, common lets get too school"
    He held my hand as we walked down the street together until we reached school.
    The sun got hotter as we sat with some friends waiting for the bell too ring...
    Eventually it rang.
     
  4. Ok I'll update later...
     
  5. More detail on surrounding preferably. Also more detail on actions... Longer updates as well. Also, put paragraphs with a space in-between. And between dialogue there should be a space. Anyway, I look forward to the story.
     
  6. I walked to my class down the long corridors as other students rushed past...

    I stepped into my class and sat down on my kinda
     
  7. I sat down on my kinda wonky chair then I heard a strong walk so I turned around...

    "hey korey" I smiled

    "hi penny" he smiled back

    I know I have a perfect boyfriend but how could I not like korey... He had perfect wavy blond hair, beautiful green eyes and he was tall and strong.
    I was about to ask him how be was when the light wood door swung open and a rather sickly looking mr Gregory stumbled in...
    It was strange as mr gregory was often healthy looking and chirpy but today he was pale, his hair was messed up and his eyes were blood shot.

    "he... Hello cla, em class" he mumbled looking confused.

    "sir are u okay" korey said looking confused.

    "I'm f... Fine" he replied
    " so today we, we are l l l learning about..." he fell to the floor!
     
  8. Omg! I hate falling on the floor
     
  9. We all ran over to the front of the class, me and korey barged to front of the class.

    My eyes widened as mr Gregory lay there, he was shaking and his mouth was frothing then we all ran as mr Gregory sprung up.

    His eyes were white and his teeth nashed together, his mouth was frothing and blood tears fell from the corner of his eyes.

    Me and korey looked at each other then we left the room only to see a load of students running put from large wood doors and stair ways...

    "were the hell is micheal" I screamed

    Me and korey ran into the toilets and locked the door.

    "whats goin on!" I said

    He looked at me with his lush green eyes and said

    "what ever it is I will protect u..."

    I felt like I was melting as he looked into my deep blue eyes, our moment stopped as we heard a faint noise coming from a cubical...

    "micheal!" I Whimpered

    He was sucking my best friend kaitlin
    Face off!
    He stopped and looked at me

    "penny" he looked at me

    "let's go"
    I turned away to face korey, we opened the door to see the once busy corridor, empty and almost ghostly...
     
  10. Less romance, more killing please! Ha
     
  11. The hot weather made this smell build up and distile in the air, we looked down the hall and there lay a young girl,

    "Amy?!?" I shouted
    I sprinted the hall...

    "no Amy why?!?" tears streamed down my face

    "she gone penny, we must go, she's gonna be one of the soon" korey said

    I looked up at him and nodded. We walked away when we heard her groan, I turned to see this distorted girl with a twisted neck and bent limbs...

    "RUN!!!" I screamed as we ran to an office

    I locked the door and stood their panting in relief. Korey walked up to me and held me then he gave my the most passionate kiss I had ever had...

    "korey..." I stumbled

    "don't speak" he whispered

    We kissed again and It was beautiful until we saw it...
     
  12. This stories chain of events makes little sense... :/
     
  13. A horrible corpse lay in the corner of the office... It was dead, I was sure.
    Something or someone had killed it...
    We then saw a tall man, it was mr tames, he looked at us and smirked in a creepy way then he unlocked a door at the end of the office, withought a word he led us through...

    In the room was about 7 people, all students except mr tames, he was obviously amused as he had seen us kiss, he creeped me out.

    All the people in the room looked scarred but secure, mr tames locked the door behind us and explained

    "we need to stay together for safety..."

    A young man interrupted
    "what's goin on?"

    Mr tames replied
    "zombies dam it, can't u see, we need to move, were not safe here"
     
  14. It all happened so fast...!

    We walked through the corridor in a big group, most of us had a weapon except me so I searched the hall as we walked through until I found a baseball bat, one of the sportsmen must have dropped it. I picked it up and caught up with the group...

    We walked for ages until we started to walk up the stairs... I was trailing behind a korey was just infront of me,
    Suddenly I felt a sharp pain on my neck so I swung the bat and smashed a zombie right in the face, he fell down and I hit him several times until he was mashed up like a mashed potato!

    The group looked at me in horror..!

    "what?!?" I said looking confused

    Korey replied
    " yur neck, penny u have been bitten!"

    "keep goin we will sort it out later" said mr tames rather selfishly

    We carried on up the stairs until we reached the door to the top floor...

    I looked through a crack in the door and say nothing so we walked through into the top floor hall, I sat down...

    "wait guys, stop. I I feel faint"

    The group looked at me and then at the end of the hall... There must of been about 6 of them running up too us!

    "please wait for me"
    I tried to get up but I felt the infection spread through my body,
     
  15. Are you killing her off already?