black stiker (open rp)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Takon (01), Jun 5, 2012.

  1. A man dressed in all black ran down the street a deep cut in his side from a knife that fell to the ground from a dead robber- oh god oh god oh god- the man ran scared for his life as the wound closed
     
  2. It's not detailed, poorly written... I don't even...
     
  3. How is this a RP? It seems more like a poor beginning to a story