tear? what's that.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by steelwolfe2, May 30, 2012.

  1. Soldiers Pov
    "It's escaped all units coverage on sector three take it down." me and my squad turn the corner and I see it. It looks like a 16 year old girl maybe 5'4" long brown wavy hair blue eyes what's going on "no kill shots fire" I pull the trigger following my sergeants orders. One bullet grazes her arm.

    Ali's Pov
    Guns thirty men maybe should be easy I'll leap off the wall take down the first guy take his gun and shoot down the rest of them ok here we go I run jump off the wall kick the closest man in the face I catch his gun and fire it into the crowd of men they all drop.

    Leaders Pov
    "it has escaped repeat it has escaped target is heading to the town of rosewell" "thank you Shelby now send our forces to capture her" this is bad if it gets to land there's no tell what it'll do.

    Tristan's Pov
    "Ok on my own I'm 18 and living alone in a new city I can do this what's the worse that can happen in rosewell" tristan looks in the mirror fixes his short brown hair slightly his grey eyes look odd compared to others in the town I think I'll explore a little after a few hours of walking around I walk along the beach and a girl washes up on the beach.
     
  2. Awesome 
     
  3. This reminds me of Elfen Lied 

    And please do use periods. It's easier on the eyes.
     
  4. Bump dude awesome
     
  5. Ali's Pov
    I'm in a room the owner of this building is probably hostel I should eliminate it and leave I stand up walk out the door there's a boy I put a gun to his head "who are you"

    Tristan's Pov
    10 min earlier
    What am I doing I'm just a collage fresh men I shouldn't have brought that girl I defiantly shouldn't have striped her naked but her cloths were soaking wet.
    Now
    "im Tristan I'm a student at roswell community college i found you on the beach and decided to help you please don't kill me" "bringing me here was stupid you don't know who I am or what I could have done to you so why rescue me" "I saw you were in trouble I would feel guilty if I left you there so I helped you" oh god she's gonna shoot me in the head she removes the gun from his head "guilty? I don't understand" I turn and face her rembering she was naked "its an emotion surely you know it's like shame which apperently you don't have" she looks down her cheeks turn red "why do I care if you see me like this I don't understand? Why are my cheeks red why do I feel so weird and upset?" I stand up and drape a blanket around her "who are you and why don't you know what feelings are" she slowly stops blushing she looks up at me

    Ali's Pov
    I don't understand this I still feel weird even though he covered me but this is diffrent I like this kind of weird more it seems to be conected with looking at his face after he did somthing nice for me " I am artificial living intel or Ali for short I was a computer they graphed me into a human brain to see what would happen they decided to cancel the project when I fused with the human body secondary functions such as feelings needs wants instincts and that's all I know." I watch as he starts walking away I feeling weird agian this feeling is bad why do I feel bad as he walks away wait now he's walking back yay back to the good feeling wait he's walking away again what's he doing he's stoping "ok who made you"
    Did he not understand what I said "no I don't know anything else at all only how to speak breath eat and what I'm suposed to do when I have to "go"." I think that was a good explanation. "so you can't fend for your self at all can you. Do you want to live here with me while you adjust." the good feeling it's diffrent I feel so warm wait my face is doing somthing "from your smile I'm assuming that's a yes" "smile?"
     
  6.  ...


    So... That's what my name means?
     
  7.  ALI IS A ROBOT 
     
  8. No, I'm the Artificial Living Intel 
     
  9. Aka Robot. 
     
  10.  robot lol
    Bump
     
  11. Ali's Pov
    I lay in bed thinking what was that feeling earlier it felt so good then there was that other feeling that one that felt bad I don't know then my face why did it do that I don't understand all I know is I want to stay here with Tristan.

    Tristan's Pov
    Wow pretty girl in the other room but shes got some problems and is that thing about the computer true I wonder the glass shatters and a bullet flys past my face. Oh crap what was that.

    Soldiers Pov
    "Missed the secondary target no sign of the Russian agent yet the target is in the back room all squads move in" I watch as my squad surrounds the building the door slides open and there she is the target wait we're did she get a sword.
     
  12. Ali's Pov
    I have to stand the first man grab his gun shoot the second man cut four of there heads off shoot ten more cut down eight of them finish the rest with a frag grenade I pull of the twelfth guy alright here we go

    Tristan's Pov
    What was that so much glass it just shattered its like someone shot at me I can barely hear is that screaming sounds like more gun shots what was that loud bang I get up and walk to the door there's Ali's standing in the middle of of the dead people she's covered in blood she walks over to my "are you ok Tristan there's red stuff coming out of you come on I don't want you hurt" she really doesn't feel does she all those people just gunned down and were did she get a sword.

    Ali's Pov
    Why do I feel bad about him seeing me kill those people why do I feel Bad about killing those people and why do I feel bad about him being hurt why do I want him to be ok why I don't understand and were did I find this sword i can't remember.
     
  13. Tristan's Pov
    I awake to fine a sleeping Ali lying next to me. She must have been worried and fell asleep waiting for me to awake. She probably doesn't even understand why she was worried or for that matter know what worried is. I stand up to discover she striped me and then bandaged my wounds. I walk over and start getting dressed

    Ali's Pov
    Why did I feel so bad when he got hurt I mean I felt worse than ever before all I wanted was for him to be ok. Then there was that other feeling the one I got when I was striping him it just felt weird I don't understand any of this. Why does it have to be me. Ok I've decided I'm going to protect him at all costs and I want him to protect me it makes me feel. what was the word he used happy? That weird feeling is also there when I think about him protecting me. I hear something is he finally awake I open my eyes and there he is putting on clothing I feel my face smile with joy at the sight of him. I know one thing for sure I want to stay here with him.
     
  14. Wow! They need to get together! NOW! Lol