loss and love story

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *xxjh127xx (01), May 29, 2012.

  1. I flung myself on my bed with a sigh,I still had so much unpacking to do it was unreal. I knew these next few days were going to be a nightmare.
    A new country.A new house and a new school.

    Some days it's hard to get out of bed after what happened to him,the boy I had loved so dearly. The memories of that night still haunt me,I can still picture him now
    His dirty blond hair,golden tan and his blue sapphire eyes.I miss him more everyday.it kills me knowing that I can never see him again,that I can never change what happened to him.

    What do u think so far probably loads of mistakes but oh well let me no what u think
     
  2.  Go on...
     
  3. I would like you to bump.
     
  4. I kinda hate it when people they love are dead or do die in stories
     
  5.  So Cherry, I shall please you with no deaths in my story 
     
  6. I will continue later cause I got to get ready for school
     
  7. I desperately believed that we would be together for ever.I couldn't have been more wrong.o can still remember the night it happens to him

    Past:
    I fiddled with my locket desperately deciding what to wear,it had to be perfect,it was our 1year anniversary
    I tore my wardrobe apart trying to find the perfect outfit.in the end I picked my amazing black dress,not to long,not to short and some black mini heels.it was perfect.I chose the straight hair look and added my final touches like my little clutch bag and bracelet and I was of.And just in time,there was a knock on the door,he was here.I rushed down the stairs to let him in,he was just standing there his dirty blond hair flopping in the wind,a twinkle in his sapphire blue eyes and a smile across his face.

    As I walked towards him,he handed me a huge bunch of flowers,red roses and carnations,my favourite.he was so romantic.As we got in his car I heard our song was playing.everything was going perfect shame it wouldn't last long

    Sorry but I can't do any more I have to go for school