Experiment 3085

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by LuviPuppet, May 29, 2012.

  1. Darkness masks the light of the moon tonight, the air seems chilly and I can't help but notice someone following me. Maybe I'm just being paranoid tonight.. I glance back trying to make out this stranger following me. He seems to be looking down at the ground every time he passes a street light. His steps seem to be increasing when mine are, but yet he stays a distance. I zip up my black jacket and pull my long hair to the side so I have a clear view when I look back. I tighten my grip on my leather shoulder bag..something doesn't feel right.. I notice an ally up ahead if I can get there I can do something about this guy without catching any footage on the security cameras. A light breeze of cold wind blows my brown hair back and sends a chill down my spine. I reach the ally and I turn into it. Then I hear a laugh he speaks, "We found you experiment 3085." I start to think 'WE'. Hands tighten around my arms holding me back. "Night night princess." It goes black.
     
  2. This is my first story. Let me know if you like it, and if I should continue.
     
  3. I love the story! Perhaps instead of 1 looong paragraph several medium sized ones
     
  4. Thanks okay.