A new life

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Zoey_loves_ya (01), May 24, 2012.

  1. I wish i was back with erik instead of this hole. I was so confused on what was going on. So i went to my new room and started to fall to sleep. I heard a sound so frighting ot was scary. My life was changing i just have to eccept it.
     
    #1 *Zoey_loves_ya (01), May 24, 2012
  2. Spell check, more info, details
    That'll make it so much better
     
    #2 *Aalayah_May (01), May 24, 2012
  3. Better grammar please. Perhaps a longer update, better glimpse in2 the story?
     
    #3 -CYP-VII_SagaciousBirdy_III, May 24, 2012
  4. A new life

    This life sucks! The only good thing is seeing Stevie Rae. All the dead kids are here. I heard a rumble from the ground as if there was a earthquake. I was scared, but didn't show it. I wish i had everyone here. These tunnels need some decroation. I zoned out and started to think about all my mistakes. Man, im so stupid! I was no longer a virgin. Great, im a stupid girl.
     
    #4 *Zoey_loves_ya (01), May 25, 2012
  5. Okay this story sucks so no updates.
     
    #5 *Zoey_loves_ya (01), May 25, 2012
  6. You should have capitalized the title of your story.
     
    #6 *Allyhottiejenkins (01), May 25, 2012
  7. I just don't get it at all
     
    #7 Cherry1313, May 25, 2012
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