Re: **** in a Box I swear a shit ton because I'm impersonating an angsty, misguided idiotic teenager in this fucking story. ._.
Re: **** in a Box Diamond, you say it's interesting yet you don't like it. Hm, how INTERESTING! As for the swearing, honestly? In my opinion, if you get past it all, you might actually enjoy the story. I can tune it down, but if swearing's a helluva huge problem in this, please consider the fact... Is the F word that big of a deal for you to say, 'OH LOOK MORE SWEARING, I AUTOMATICALLY DON'T WANT TO READ BECAUSE IT TAINTS MY EYES EVEN IF IT'S CENSORED' because in my eyes, you can skip the asterisks and keep on reading. Just stating my opinion. I'm not trying to piss anyone off, though. Really. ._. QINNN<3 I swear a shit ton, AND I do a shit ton of creeping. ;D With that said, I'm looking at you inside the closet. .-.
Re: **** in a Box Okay, in my opinion the swearing supports the story, considering the fact it's based off a stereotypical angst ridden teenager's interpretation of life... But if it seriously bothers you I can tone it down by two levels. :/
Re: **** in a Box What are all the swear words? :/ I agree, cursing does humanize this story and it does support it.
Re: **** in a Box The swearing makes sense in the story and it's censored. Why is this even an issue?
Re: **** in a Box Actually it's very easy to tell what to blurred out words are .-. But then again I know how Chloe cusses and what words .-. Oh and the blurred out word is a nickname for Richard ._.