A man in a black suit stands not moving he is skinny and tall maybe 6' his thick wavy brown hair sits under his fedora his grey eyes stare an evil grin on his face. In his had he holds a thin blade dripping with blood. A swarm of maybe 15 small bats spin around him. He looks through the sky light at his friend Shelby. Pov Shelby I lay on the floor my vision is blurring my blonde hair sits in from of my face I see the that blood has stained it I look up my gun lays across the floor from me under that mans foot gotta get outta here before he shows up he will just brag about saving me again."ok last chance sir let me go before I kill you" there's no way he's gonna fall for that "how do you plan on doing that" he laughs loudly damn it I guess I'm gonna have to live with his bragging. Pov Tristan "I guess she's not gonna make it out of this oh well" I remove my fedora and have my bats break through the glass into the room I hear the man scream and Shelby yell "damn it Tristan" i smirk and drop into the room the bats clear the man looks at me and I turn to face him and slowly bring my fedora to my head "hello my name's Tristan"
Carl's Pov What hello he crashes through my window right after this thief tries to steal from me and he says hello and what the hell is with the bats fine I'm killing this nut job before he causes me more trouble. Tristan's Pov "no response but I love the talkers" I watch as he draws the gun and fires 5 times I block 4 of the bullets with my sword and catch the 5th one the look on his face is priceless so surprised I throw the bullet into his stomach the blood shoots out his face changes now it looks less like surprise and more like he's seen something Devine I walk up next to him. he looks up at me " are are you god" he coughs up blood "god? No I'm quite the opposite I'm afriad" I stab the blade into his heart. Shelby's Pov "damn it Tristan you always have to save me that's the 5th person you've killed that I've herd ask you the same question and your anwser is always the same why don't you tell me what you actuly are" I know he wont he never does but I always ask "all you need to Know is I'm here to save you" he's fixing his fedora that ass he thinks he's better than me "if that's so then get over here and save me I'm bleeding out" I hate seeing his stupid hat and he's always wearing a suit his sword already sheathed to look like a cane I hate that I need his help oh crap everything's going black he's smirking damnit can't move everything's black.
Shelby's Pov I awake in my bed i look to my right my cloths are laying on a chair I'm in my pjs but how. " aw your awake" I look up and see Tristan standing in my door way still wearing his suit and fedora but wait Tristan lives on the other side of the city "how did you get into my apartment wait did you change me you pervert what kind of man are you wait your not a man are you your only 17." I throw my pillow at him he slams my door shut. Tristan's Pov "Haha who would have thought a 16 year old girl would be that hot tempered." I look at the gold idol on table "this was what she was trying to steal I guess I wish she would stop putting her self in danger just to make ends meet" i start thinking about Shelby her long curly blonde her blue eyes and how cute she was in glasses that's why I always steal her contacts I look in my hand at the contacts I smirk and remove my fedora. I should get to work but I have to change first can't. Change hear though I think it's funny if all she sees me in is this suit and fedora.
Shelby Pov "Damn it" I can't find my contacts I sigh and put my glasses on and I look down at my white shirt and skinny jeans it's not impressive but maybe it'll help me get him to wear anything but a suit I leave my room and he's gone. I spot his fedora sitting on the table I grab it and put it on my head. "a sign that he'll be back he loves his stupid fedora" she blushes slightly. Tristan's Pov My sweat shirt is a little to big I like my jeans though my sneakers look weird I guess the reason for all this is I've gotten to use to fighting in a suit all other cloths just feel big now I get to the tv station were I work the cameras. I walk inside all these people I can barly remeber there names I'm not social but they love my camera work for some reason I wear a smile but really I just want to wear my stupid suit and fedora and fight people. 7 hours later about 6:00pm after sundown Tristan's Pov "welcome to news at six on channel...." I hear it every night boring as always one of my bats flys in and sits on my shoulder he tells me Shelby left to go steal somthing again and she had gotten hurt again. I run out the station people screaming at me for leaving in the middle of a news report no time to get my suit or my sword I through my hood over my head I guess this will have to do. That's when I see it a news chopper flying above a man with a gun holding to Shelby's head. Tristan can see the camera pointed at them Tristan decides he can't interfere with them then he notices that Shelby is wearing his fedora with her cat suit. Tristan sees a man in a suit and he smiles. Shelby's Pov Damn it I got caught again is that a bat oh no not again I look weak when he does this the man holding her sees Tristan jump onto the roof Tristan wearing a new black. suit the man calls for his guards Tristan kills them with ease as Shelby breaks free she tosses Tristan his fedora. Tristan's Pov I catch my fedora I slowly put it on my head as the news chopper zooms in on me. The wind blows my hair and I let the hat fall onto my head I jump forward and kill the man by shoving my hand through his stomach. Shelby runs up and raps her arms around me. I'm confused why would she.."Tristan take me home please" I pick her up and jump away with her" Man with suits Pov I run out onto the street in my under ware "police police a man just stole my suit" News paper "does god wear a suit"
XD nice ending. But why does everyone think he is god? Elaborate. And maybe punctuation? it's awesome!!!
Shelby spends hours talking to her friends about the man who came to save her the man that can catch bullets move so fast he can't be seen the man who can jump from building to building holding her the man that the newspapers call god the man who wears a suit. Shelby's Pov "no I'm not in love with him I thought you invited me to lunch to talk about something else" damn it avalon I hate you so much "ya but Shelby he saved your life and that fedora" is avalon blushing "his fedora is stupid I'm leaving Avalon" I storms out avalon chases after me "wait Shelby please I'm...." "avalon why did you sto....." Tristan stands there in his suit and fedora "why hello ladies" every one in the restaurant including avalon ether freak out or faint. I stand there getting mad "do you always have to do that" "what I enjoy a good entrance" I grab him and drag him out "when you apear like that is why people think your god Tristan" "it's not my fault I'm awsome plus the ladies love it" I stop throw him down and kick him and walk away "ow why would you kick me" I walk away a tear roles down my cheek I whisper "your such an idiot Tristan" Tristan's Pov I watch Shelby walk away and I don't understand why did she kick me why is she mad.
Avalon's Pov "So your names Tristan" Shelby's clearly crying I don't think he noticed though is really that stupid "well yes it is I'm Tristan and you are" is he raising his eyebrow raised I smack him in the face with a book he's a dumb ass "women just don't like me to day" "are you that stupid she ran off crying" "she she did" oh my god he really didn't notice "yes she ran of crying" "I I have to go" I watch as Tristan leaps to the top of a twenty story building and runs off if he is god then god is stupid. Tristan's Pov She was crying she was crying I think it again and again as I jump from building to building to her apartment I climb in through her window "Shelby" I notice the place is trashed there are bullet holes in the wall and the door has been broken down. He turns to leave and his suit rips.
Tristan's Pov I dropped my suit coat not thinking anything of it and jumped out the window. he spreads his bats through the city and quickly has a location he smiles and gets there quickly. He runs in as he fights his shirt is shot and cut up until it was gone his fedora gets shot to shreds he uses his tie to choke someone out. He uses his shoes to beat some ones face smiling the whole time he runs in the last room and sees Shelby tied up and bleeding blood dripping from her. Shelby's Pov Ow it hurt so much I cant really hear any more but that sounded like a bang it's Tristan ya and he's not wearing a suit for once I guess I got my wish wait he's not smiling he always smiles every time he's saved me he's been happy smiling and bragging what's going on Tristan's Pov They hurt her they hurt her badly I feel my eye twitch and a man walks in slowly clapping "your no god are you your a monster just like me but the difference is I'm better..." I grab him and shoves the mans own hand through his chest but i dont kill him I leave the men lying there screaming. I pick up Shelby and escape.
Shelby's Pov I awake in the hospital most my bodies in casts I look to my left and asleep and sitting in a chair also bandaged it Tristan he's wearing nothing but his suit pants. Haha I feel my self blush slightly.a small nurse walks in she smiles at me "I'm glad to see your awake this man hear brought you in he wouldn't move from that seat not even to get him self bandaged. We had to bandaged him while he was sitting there" I look at Tristan again "he sat here the whole time how long was I asleep" "about three days" "three days and he hasn't moved" "that's right he must really care for you" I blush a little bit "he does?" I smile at Tristan
Tristan's Pov I awake to find Shelby enjoying some food ow my ribs hurt I broke a few in the last battle "hey Shelby glad to see your awake" shelby blushes a lot in confused why would she blush "hey are you on Shelby" "ya I'm fine it's nothing" she smiles then I remember what Avalon said "she loves you" I smile at her "I'm glad your" she blushes again "you should probably shave Tristan" "ya probably but I wanted to make sure your ok first" "thank you Tristan but really you don't have to stay" I look down maybe she doesn't want me to "I'm staying here" She looks confused and mad "Tristan I know you wanna help but you can't help from here I want you to stay so much but you can't" "I can and will I'm sorry" We sit in silence for hours the nurse releases us I take Shelby home and as I turn to leave she grabs me and kisses me. Shelby's Pov Home at last wait is he leaving but he he can't leave yet this this could be my last chance I have to go for I run over grab his shoulder and kiss him god I hope he feels the same way
Tristan's Pov It takes me a few seconds but I over come the surprise wrap my arms around her and kiss her back. Afterwards we stand in each others embrace for a few min. she looks up at me "Tristan will... Will you stay here with me tonight I'm... I'm to scared to stay alone tonight" she buries her face in my chest out of embarrassment "of course I will Shelby I understand"