Just Another Love Story

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Mar_Luvs_U (01), May 15, 2012.

  1. Update woman, I love it! It's like the best ever....my ff is such a long progress lol, I write too much and barely any comments lol oh well •__•
     
  2. Maria's POV
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    Later that night I was getting ready. Alex had told me to dress nice. I curled my hair, had on a sparkly black dress with silver heels. I put on some natural makeup with a lil eye liner. I looked in the mirror an thought "looks good" I walked out if the bathroom and picked up my purse and walked downstairs. Alex was standing at the bottom in a tux with a bouquet of roses in his hand.
    "You look amazing Maria"
    I couldn't help but blush.
    "Why thank you. You look nice yourself" He hands me the flowers.
    "For you" I smile and nod. He kisses my cheek and leads me to the door.
    "Ladies First" I stay silent as he opens the door and I walk out. There's a limo in the driveway. I cover my mouth.
    "oh my god! Alex you shouldn't have!"
    "I wanted to" I run and hug him.


    Short I know haha Feedback
     
  3. Lol I'm not one of those grammar freaks, I just read for the fun of it, and I LOVE IT
     
  4. Awwww sooo cute UPDATE!!
     
  5. So adorable! Wish I has romance, smeh lol mine is just randomness lol
     
  6. BUMP update soon I want to hear the rest! No scratch that I NEED to hear the rest!
     
  7. D'aww and I am with Cherry
     
  8. AHHHH I LOVE IT!!!! Such a cute fairy tale lol
     
  9. I will:) just in a few
     
  10. Alex opens the door for me and I get in carefully. He gets in shortly after me and closes the door. He puts his arm around me and I see some type if box in his pocket. I keep looking trying to figure out what kind of box it is. But I can only see the lid and that's no help. I sigh.
    "Are you okay Baby?" Alex Asks
    I couldn't tell him that I saw the box so I lie and say
    "Oh yeah I'm fine just a lil tired that's all"
    He nods at me and I rest my head on his shoulder. I feel him lean down as his lips brush against my ear he whispers "I love you" I smile and whisper back " I love you too" He holds me close and about 20 minutes later we arrive at a gazebo. It was gorgeous. Rose petals on the ground creating a path to the gazebo. Lights sparkled from the gazebo. Flowers spread everywhere. Alex took my hand and lead me there. I walked with a sparkle in my eye. I couldn't believe this. He was truly the best boyfriend ever. He walked me to the gazebo and pulled out the chair for me. I sat down and smiled. On the table there was a note that said "I love you. Look to your left" I did as the note said an looked to my left and saw....Alex on his knees. He took my hand and pulled out the box. He opened the box and inside was a beautiful diamond ring. I gasped and quickly covered my mouth. Alex says
    "Maria I love you with all my heart. There's no one else on this planet that I would rather be with. Your the love of my life and without you I would die. The day I met you I knew I loved you. Now that I have you I never wanna loose you" I tear up. Alex continues with " Maria your amazing and could do way better than me but you choose me and I dont know why. Your heart is full of love and your so caring. I don't deserve to be with a a girl as great as you. So Maria, will you do me the honor of spending the rest of my life with you. Cause your all I live for. Maria will you marry me" by now I was in tears...not sadness but tears of joy...as I say "Alex....."



    Feedback? Hahahaha:)
     
  11. Omg I'm literally crying, I wish my boyfriend did that too me....tears of joy, SAY YES DAMN IT!!!
     
  12. Hahaha Bella sweetie its okay
     
  13. Omg!!! Hes like every girls dream boyfriend!!! This is sooo romantic