Murderer in the Box 2

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *ChristianandBells (01), May 14, 2012.

  1. Fack ok lol I'll update soon, been busy. And Bella, Fan, and Ali I think r still alive.....I think
     
  2. Oh and Tristan died too
     
  3. I'm also still alive
     
  4. I'm still alive  and I plan on staying that way.
     
  5. OK OK IM UPDATING RITE NOWsay bump if ur still checking in
     
  6. I'm alive!  I think I'm going crazy though •~•
     
  7. Tick tock tick tock
     
  8. Ali, Fan, Maria, Tash POV

    Ali pulls Fan aside

    "Hey what are you guys doing, don't leave me!!" Maria shouts

    "We arnt going to leave you Mar, I just need to tell Fan something" Ali says.

    Ali takes Fan around the corner

    "Hey ok so I have been thinking-"

    Right then and there Tash rams rite into them, knocking everyone down.

    "What the hell?" Fan gets up and looks around "Oh it's....Tash rite?"

    "Yep, thank god I found u guys, some very weird things r going on, I lost Zach" Tash quickly responded

    "Ok well I have a horrible awful gut wrenching plan," Ali says.

    They wait for her to tell them

    "Ok well I have been running clues around in my mind, trying to make sense of this task, and as awful as it may sound, I found this axe in this bush" points to the bush next to them "I believe we have to-"

    "Kill Maria?" Tash says with no color in her eyes

    "Yeah"

    Fan states in disbelief but something about the way she was looking, it made it seem as if she didnt care about Maria, that it was the facts and she was going to do it

    "Ok, we have to" says Fan

    "Alright we will lure her over here and then.....we have to hit her in the chest and rip out her......"Ali struggles with the words "heart"

    They each stare at each other then nod, this isn't going to be easy but they have too. They each get ready, Tash with the axe, Ali and Fan ready to get the heart

    "Hey Maria, think we found something!" Fan calls.

    Maria sighs of relief and rounds the corner......

    To get an axe in the heart



    And instantly dies


    All three of them stand over Maria's body, squirming, gasping for air, the eyes slowly beginning to become soulless and empty......her body stopped and she said with her last breath of air

    "Win this for all of us"

    That was it


    They each tried not to tear up and bent down.....Fan grabbed the heart and quickly got the clue and threw it in a random direction...

    The note read "You have done what was needed to be done, congratulations, its not over but soon will be, oh and by the way, look out"

    They each look at each other and then Fan and Ali jump away from each other and 5 ninja stars hit Tash in the head......she fell over.....dead......

    Fan and Ali state in disbelief and horror, for 2 of their friends have just died, they look in the direction of the ninja stars and c the end of long brown hair round a corner......they just sit there in dismay......for they may be the next to die.......
     
  9. Mar love u!!! Hahahaha ur probably super creeped out by me
     
  10. Maybe just a lil bit haha jk love ya 2
     
  11. Bella POV

    I quickly run, my long wavy hair blowing past me, for I c a fountain and someone in a black cloak sitting next to it. I keep running for it is the Exit, but also because of the mysterious person, they are like a magnet to me, no matter how hard I try and give them space, I always come bac for more. I know they are dangerous and I will end up hurt, but I can't help but want the bad, it's like a drug to me....I come to a slow jog and kneel before them

    "You have done well, ur skills have improved, Bells"

    The way he says my name sends chills down my bac

    "I'm glad master"
     
  12. Go self!! *victory dances in maria's blood*
    I bet I'm the next to go  *runs around screaming*
     
  13. alimaybe maybe not