Mystics

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Rhetorical, May 15, 2012.

  1. So, I realize this might sound a bit familiar, but it'll separate, I promise (Ehem, Bella)

    And yes, to all of you annoyed Fan Fictioners, this is my last story involving characters featuring my club :3
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    Bella POV

    I woke up inside a large, dome shaped structure. with bars. Almost like a gold birdcage. I noticed a few other people sprawled out of the ground. Some, with their mouths wide open. Was I dead?
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    Fan POV

    I opened my eyes with a start. Where was I? I couldn't remember what happened. Was it amnesia? Yet, I couldn't shake off this feeling of Desa Vu.
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    Ali POV

    As I regained consciousness, I remained placed as I was. I was in a foreign place. I was stomach down on a smooth floor. No, not completely smooth. Small, linear indents, forming complicating patterns and words in a different alphabet. Greek? I peeked through my eyelids and saw circles upon circles, filled with those squiggly line letters. Something moved, so I tightened my eyelids once again.
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  2. If in sprawled on the ground too can I have my mouth shut? I don't wanna catch flies 
     
  3. Gasp!!! Lol it's cool, I really like it so far!!
     
  4. So I'm not in this story
     
  5. There ain't no flies where we are, Tash 
     
  6. Good. Spiders? 
     
  7. Arrggg why am I always excluded
     
  8. Maria POV

    I think I was dead, in fact, I was sure of it. I opened my eyes when I heard rustling. I was in a bird cage, filled with desa Vu-stimulating people. I studied the face of a guy who's face was near mine. A name came to mind. Matt. Who's Matt?
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    Matt POV

    I feel like I'm being watched....
     
  9. Zach POV

    I think I'm dead.
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    Linda POV

    I opened my eyes to darkness and a peculiar shine. I was back to the floor, face up, palms upward.
    I noticed many rising humanoids, probably just waking up, realizing their predicament. I heard some yawn, so I decided to get up. That was when I saw where the shine was coming from. A golden birdcage enclosed us all, illuminating the bars from the inside of them. Outside was pitch black. Nothingness.
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    Zach POV

    Yeah, I'm definitely dead.
     
  10.  I'm non-existent!!  -haunts beings with my conscience-
     
  11. I like how the guys r dumbfounded and the girls r boss hahaha, very good I LOVE IT!!!! KEEP UPDATING!!!
     
  12.  Bella, I actually didn't notice that
     
  13. GAAAW stupid stupid update bug!
     
  14. Tristan POV

    As soon as I opened my eyes, I knew where I was. Hell.
    I smirked.
     
  15. im never in the stories
     
  16. hell?!?! What did I ever do!!!! Lol
     
  17. Bella POV

    I decided to approach a girl closest to me, a brunette chic with eyes that reflected the light from the gold bars.
    "Hey, do you know where we are?" I asked.
    "Nope," She replied.
    "Well someone better know," I remarked.
    "Yea," She whispered, "I'm Fan." She held out a hand.
    "I'm Bella," I took the hand and we exchanged grins.
    "It's nice too meet you," Fan said.
    Then she vanished into thin air.