The Muderer in the Box

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *ChristianandBells (01), May 14, 2012.

  1. Matt is dressed up as the Joker and all the girls scream and Tanner says "dude u r freaking scary and that character is annoying" they all laugh and make remarks
     
  2. Also I'm totally out of character ;n; I would pounce on and bite Zach's head if I were a lion/tiger
     
  3. I would never scream I'd take out a gun and shoot him
     
  4. Tanner is dressed up as Spiderman and Bella's eyes widen. U check urself out "I'm pretty alright with this" all the girls giggle and laugh
     
  5. Thanks Bella...your costumes no better lol jkjk but the Jokers cool
     
  6. Finally Zach is dressed up as Harry Potter "awh now this ain't right!!" everyone busts out laughing
     
  7. Aw Zach I'd rather be in Ur costume so be happy
     
  8. Love the story! It's so interesting! Try spelling out the entire word, because it is annoying to read all the mistakes. Also, try to make the updates longer, instead of short little ones. Just trying to help!!!! Love the storyline, and the plot! The characters are nicely developed.
     
  9. Game Controller POV

    "Now aren't you a pretty bunch of pieces (evil laughter) my pretty Fan, dance for me Bella" she says "awh hell no!!" he continues "my fierce Ali, anyway, I know have created a task for you. Just party, talk amongst urselves. It will begin shortly...."
     
  10. Ok Lindsey!! Love the input(not sarcastic)
     
  11. Eceryone's POV

    We all look around at each other and look around, the music gets a little louder and creepier but we all notice the buffet of food and walk over to it
     
  12. Linda's POV

    "Ooooo looks yummy" she goes to grab a bite and Tristan knocks it out of ur hand "hey ya big jerk!" she pushes u and he clenches his fist but doesn't push back
     
  13. I hate wen random people or in this case things call me pretty it's annoying
     
  14. Tristan's POV

    "Do you really think that he would lay out food for us, he captured all of us and now is being nice? A little sketchy don't you think. I say we don't eat any of it and just dance and talk...
     
  15. Make Zach eat it 
     
  16. Everyone's POV

    We all look at each other then nod. Tanner walks over to Linda and talks with her. Fan and Ali start talking, as well as Jenny and Tash. Bella hesitates to go over to Zach but instead is stopped by Matt and is forced to talk to him. Maria and Tanner flirt and talk and laugh it up