Kay so my name is Allison but people call me Ali. I'm 17 and I have sky blue eyes and dirty blonde curly hair. I live in South Carolina so I basically always have a fair tan you could say. My family are the best. My mom Rachel. My dad Michael and my brother Drake. My families small but they still rock. Feedback before I right more please
Haha Ali I did but Allison is my middle name so it's based on that and God person I'm sorry for and inconvenience MY errors may have caused you
Kay so after that feedback...This is my story my first one and not to sound rude but I'm not perfect I will make mistakes and I hope y'all can look past them to see how good the story will turn out. _______________________________ Hey my names Jake. I'm 5' 11" and I have brown eyes with a mixture of brown and blonde hair. My hair is a Justin Bieber cut as many of you would say. I'm 18 today. Me and my family dont get along. It's the basic "hate/love" relationship. I live across the street from a gorgeous girl. Her names Ali we don't talk much...but I want that to change cause I really like her. Thankfully we both go to the same school and school starts back tomorrow so wish me luck.... ________________________________ Ali's POV BEEP BEEP BEEP I wake up to the sound of my alarm clock. Worst sound you wanna hear cause it means summer is over and time for school. Oh joy. I get up and put on a strapless sparkly purple shirt and some dark blue skinny jeans and put on some black flats. As I look in the mirror I notice that you can still see the scars. Sh*t! I think! I quickly hurry to my makeup and use my foundation to cover them up. Finally I put a purple rhinestone headband in my hair and put on some clear lipgloss and mouth the words "let's get this over with" I grab all my needed materials and then last but my favorite I grab my phone and put it in my back pocket and walk out the door.
Jakes POV _________________________________ So I'm walking out the front door wearing a red polo shirt and some blue American Eagle pants an some tan flip flops. I see Ali heading or the bus so I approach her. "Hey Ali." "Oh hey Jake. I hope you don't mind but we can't talk long cause I gotta catch the bus...stupid parents grounded me haha" "That's actually what I came over here for. I saw you and wanted to know if maybe you wanted a ride to school?" Ali's thinking I've never really met him but yet he wants to drive me to school? Weird but okay... "Um sure sounds good cause I gotta meet my boyfriend there" Ali smiles politely. Great she has a boyfriend. "Okay." I lead Ali to my car and open the passenger door for her "Oh thank you Jake" I close the door carefully not wanting to hurt her. I get in on the drivers side. "Welcome..." Jake Says quickly with a bit of hesitation. Ali just pulls out her phone and texts TRISTAN (See Ali told ya) To: Tristan Hey!!!! I'm on my way to school. I caught a ride with Jake. I'll see you in a few! I love you bye From: Ali To: Ali Okay love you too bye From: Tristan "So how long have you and your guy been together?" Jake says "Oh about 1 year I think..."Ali says in a quiet tone. The rest of the car ride was silent... Feedback please and thank you
Ali's POV ________________________________ So I'm in the car with Jake as we pull into the school and I see 2 girls that look vaguely familiar...But I don't clearly remember them... As I'm getting out of the car, I'm guessing Jake noticed the scars on my arm because he gently grabs my shoulder and says "Why are there scars on your arm?" I try my hardest to pull away but his grip on me is actually quite comforting... wait no Ali you love Tristan...Don't you? Ughhh I say quietly "I had no one I was depressed and sad so I c-c-cut myself" by the time I finish the sentence I'm in tears and Jake pulls me into him and I bury my head in his chest as I cry. Suddenly someone knocks on the window I look up and see Tristan. Oh great! Really I wanted to stay in Jakes arms for forever but now I had to go because of Tristan...Man I was really falling for Jake....I carefully got up ad said to Jake "I'll see you later? Bye Jake" he waved an nodded. Tristan grabs my hand and we walk past them two girls...but something about them was different but what? This is something I would have to figure out...... Feedback please? An thanks
Okay so I'm getting into this myself so even with out feedback imma write more __________________________________ Bella's POV Hey I'm Bella and my sister Ashley and me just moved here from California were identical twins but totally different personalities! We both have green eyes and medium length light brown hair. We've been told that our hair flows just right in the wind. We're both 5' 6" tall so were kinda short haha Me and Ashley don't really get along... Me and her have a secret...were not like everyone else here...were...oh I've said to much already _________________________________ Ali's POV I walked past these girls but I couldn't help but stare....They looked right back and when they did I felt chills go down my spine...I could tell they were different not like us....I walked hand and hand into school with Tristan and I saw a few girls looking at him but I just rolled my eyes but he did check a few out now that made me mad....I walked to my locker and put my stuff in my locker and I noticed my bestfriend Matt next to me. I laughed and said "Hey stranger" he looked up and smiled "Hey" Me and Him always always have lockers next to each other and the same classes cause his dads the principle so we get away with alot of stuff...Them new girls went walking by us and I saw Matt check one of them out...I was a lil upset but just shook it off...What does he see in her? Ughhh I'll have to be friends with these girls. Matt says "Wanna walk to class with me" I smile and say "Who else would I walk with?" he just laugh and puts his arm around my shoulder. I slightly blush but me and him walk to class and sit down. I'm one row infront of him. The announcements come on and say "Welcome back students. Today is the start of a whole new year! In about a month or two we will be having our first dance so be prepared and get dates. Have a good first day back" I just smile. Soon enough the new girls walk in as the bell rings and the teacher says "Students these are your new classmates Bella and Ashley would y'all like to introduce y'all selves" they slightly nod and say "Well I'm Bella and that's Ashley were from California were 17 and that's bout all" The teacher say "Okay Bella go take a seat beside Matt" I see him smile and then the teacher says "Ashley go take a seat beside Ali" I think great this is gonna be a long day.