Poisoned Cries

New story Here's a sample, so it won't be very long I WANT FEEDBACK!!! Thank you
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I woke up to find liquid everywhere.It was red, so I thought it was blood. That's when I saw my little sister, a juice bottle a few feet away. "MOM!" I cried out. I heard no response, just a little laugh.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Who was it, what happened? Find out. IF you like it

 

Thank you, FINALLY

 

Thanks, update tomorrow at some point.

 

Sometime tomorrow you will find out-Fog is everywhere and there is an evil laugh somewhere-

 

Okay, short one but I have to eat, so brb

 

Okay :|
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I got out of my bed and practically ran to the door, that's when I felt the sharp pain in my stomach.
"It's okay honey, just a few minutes of pain..." My mom said. Wait. My MOM?! I ran through the door, only to pass out from the pain.
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Told ya a short one, sorry

 

I'm letting it die sorry v.v

 

Nvm, maybe