The random adventures of Kira and Derek

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *FashionablyOnTime (01), May 12, 2012.

  1. This is a comedy story, but I have a different sense of humor so if you don't think it's funny I'm sorry. But I hope you enjoy! Also in the sentences they might not talk with good grammar, that is just how some of the characters are.
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    Chapter 1: The bus ride

    Kira's POV

    I sit down on the bus and say, "Hey Noah what you doing?"

    "Reading this epic fail of a amendment one text fight between Rod and Alex!" he says as he starts laughing.

    "I wants to read it!!! Can I??" I hold out my hand, expecting to get his phone.

    "Okay one second....okay it's up, read all of it." He passes me his phone over to me.

    I start scrolling down, then I laugh "Oh my sweet jesus this is so
    entertaining!"

    Rod:"Shut up your guys against gays Alex! I want every bisexual, lesbian, gay, polysexual, transexual, transgender, and pansexual to be equal!!!"

    "You haven't even gotten to the best part!!" he laughs.

    Then Sosa and Ellie turn towards me, and start talking with me.

    "Kira what are you reading?" Sosa asks curiously.

    "Just reading a really stupid argument that Rod, Alex, Kyle, and some other people did." I say still scrolling through.

    Sosa and Ellie laugh then turn back around "Kira you truly are crazy!" they both exclaim.

    I smile then finish reading "Wow that was funny....Derek! Help me do my math homework!" I shout as I pull out my EOG packet and a pencil.

    This is us, this is what we did. I sometimes wish there was more between us but then it might ruin this, so maybe it's just fate that we don't get together...

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    Feedback and Critiquing is encouraged!
     
  2. I like it, the title is every random and it kinda give a sense of mystery. Longer updates tho 
     
  3. Okay I promise I'll make them longer
     
  4. Crap in the first sentence not Noah it's Derek xD lol I did a last minute name change
     
  5. BUMP! 
     
  6. I like this! Bump